Windsparks

I love this pic! it's so awesome! Painter is an elfwood member.

Hi everyone! Yes, this is another contest of mine, not as difficult as the others but good nonetheless! I hope!

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DETAILS:

Okay, so what i want here is poetry in the form of windsparks. Don't know what i mean. I must explain. Windspark consists of four lines and a few stanzas.

1. I dreamed I was ...
2. Place ...
3. Verb, action ...
4. Adverb ...

EXAMPLE:

I dreamed I was a wolf,
In the dark forest,
Howling,
Endlessly

AND

I dreamed I was a star,
In the night sky,
Twinkling,
Brightly

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JUDGING

This is very easy, but judging is goign to be hard. Don't do wolves, vampires and werewolves - too cliche, i will have to judge according to orginality and stirking nature.

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RULES

~ nothing erotic.
~ nothing cliche.
~ Make it only two stanzaz.
~ stanzas must be linked in nature.
~ Use ' i dreamed'
~ Please obey these rules
~ Ask me for mroe details.

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NOTES

follow all rules. if you have any question ask me please.

Writing about the following is cool.

Angels
Mothers
Birds
Snakes
Demons
Satan
Wind
Heavenly bodies
Seasons
Night
Dawn
Moonlight

And so on and on. Using these words does not guarantee you a trophy at all. On the contrary, if yo have courage to take up something u think is good and i think is fabulous, then thats splendid.

If something other then the list attracts me, then i will ttly choose that! it's only fair. It's not jsut my preference, tis your wit, originality and amazing creativeness.


I think that was the correct form of windspark. Even if it isn't my rules!!!

Good luck!! this takes a mintue and u just might win!!!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 28, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 120, Silver: 80, Bronze: 25, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    Awwwnnn....this was hard, way hard. Well, another one gone, I want to kill myself for not having more points! Seriously! i want to give all of you something!! uh.....well, anyway....this was tough.

    This time I had a tie for the bronze and silver. Way weird, and well, it turned out to my liking, at least that's how I see it.

    What won here was originality! Simple!

    GOLD: I Dream Divinely...

    WOW, i mean wow, this was amazing, mind-blowing! The originality was so great, this blew me away and I could not recover. This, entrants, is originality.

    SILVER: Progressive windspark

    Excellent idea, simply amazing! I loved this, it had potential, alot of potential to be expanded into a much better poem.

    BRONZE: I dreamed I was a bullet

    Very finely penned. It was so befitting! I really loved this!

    The HM's are in no particular order.

    Dragon dreams stays 4th though, i had a really tough time with that, it was tier.

    Anyway, another wonderful contests! All entries were amazing! Congrats everyone!

Contest Winners

  1. I Dream Divinely...
    I dreamt I was eternity / in the timeless chasms of reality... / unfolding, / endlessly. / I dreamt I was the universe / within and of the
    by Veritaserum 100 words, 9 comments, on Jul 17 10:43 AM 2007. In , Contest, Fantasy, First person, Inspirational, Life, Mystery, Poetry, Spiritual
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Progressive Windspark
    I dreamed I was a book, / In every hand, / Inspiring, / Continually. / I dreamed I was a chapter, / In the finest work, / Revealing, / Know
    by Stegofreak 100 words, 5 comments, on Jul 19 2:30 PM 2007. In
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. [ I dreamed I was a bullet, ]
    I dreamed I was a bullet, / in the darkness of your mind, / screaming, bleeding, tearing, sighing, / deadly. / I dreamed I was the catalyst, / in the revolution of my heart, / changin
    by lovely nightmare <100 words, 4 comments, on Jul 21 11:17 PM 2007
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Dragon Dreams
    by necronomijon <100 words, 11 comments, on Jul 17 1:03 PM 2007. In , Contest entry, Poetry
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Sugoi Yume [Amazing Dream]
    I dreamt I was a dream...
    I dreamt I was yours...
    by Siby Anan <100 words, 7 comments, on Jul 17 2:00 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. The Sea (for a wonderful contest)
    I dreamed I was the waves, / In the middle of the sea, / Dancing, racing / Splendedly / I dreamed I was the waves, / Onto the rocks and sho
    by Taylor Renee <100 words, 5 comments, on Jul 16 5:54 PM 2007. In , Other, Poem
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Human (For Windspark Contest)
    I dreamed I was a human, / In cold and fetal conciousness, / Brooding, / Vastly.
    by Xineph <100 words, 4 comments, on Jul 16 3:52 PM 2007. In
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. I Dreamed...
    I dreamed I was an Eagle, / High in the sky, / Flying, Soaring, / Magnificently. / I dreamed I was Mother Nature herself, / In this vast world, / Caring, Nurturing, / Tenderly.
    by I Dare to Dream <100 words, 2 comments, on Jul 20 7:04 AM 2007. In Kinda spiritual, Life, Other
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [17]

1 - 17 of 17
  • In the hallowed hill
    I dreamt I was a faery, / in the underground, hallowed hill / drinking wispy,silver wine / hungrily, deeply. / I dreamt I was rain, / in the cold crisp air, / where my faery self danced under the hallowed hi
    by QuestionSleep <100 words, 3 comments, on Jul 16 3:39 PM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Safe Within My Dreams
    I dreamed I was a lover, / In the dark of the night, / Whispering, / Sweetly. / I dreamed I was your heart, / Deep within your chest, / Bea
    by JuliaAlexandrovna <100 words, 4 comments, on Jul 16 7:02 PM 2007. In
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The Dream of Flying.
    I dreamt that I flew.
    by Siby Anan <100 words, 9 comments, on Jul 16 6:24 PM 2007. In
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Dreaming
    I dreamed I was a flower, / In the middle of a valley, / Blossoming, flowering, / Beautifully / I dreamed I was the waves, / In the middle
    by Taylor Renee 100 words, 19 comments, on Jul 17 1:24 PM 2007. In Other, Poem
    • Viewed by judge.
  • Night Air
    I dreamed I was the night air, / In the Dark Sky, / Sitting, / Gently
    by Dageek2 <100 words, 4 comments, on Jul 18 10:14 AM 2007. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I Dreamt I Was Art...
    I dreamt I was clay / on the potter's wheel... / forming, / malleably. / I dreamt I was marble / in a courtyard garden... / chiseling, / ma
    by Veritaserum 100 words, 9 comments, on Jul 17 6:28 PM 2007. In Contest, Fantasy, Fiction, First person, Inspirational, Poem, Poetry, Strange
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Happy tears
    I dreamed I saw you / in the rain / crying / happy tears
    by Lily Rosalia <100 words, 3 comments, on Jul 17 4:05 PM 2007. In
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Taylor Renee
    July 16, 2007
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    Wow.
    Awesome contest, yet again, contest Prince. Love it. May just have to enter....
    ...Stop outdoing my contests!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Siby Anan
    July 16, 2007
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    Interesting contest!

  • Taylor Renee
    July 17, 2007
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    Hey!
    How many entries are we allowed to...enter???
    And can we have more than 2 stanzas? Cuz I have a new one of these....but its longer than two stanzas

    PS:
    I'm already asking friends to join your group!!

    • Asfand
      July 17, 2007
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      u can enter alot....oh and it can be as many stanzas long as u like though the minimum is 2.....

      thnx princesss!!!

    • Asfand
      July 17, 2007
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      u can enter alot....oh and it can be as many stanzas long as u like though the minimum is 2.....

      thnx princesss!!!


  • caitecola
    July 17, 2007
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    I have a question! Okay, maybe two. First thing, can it be more than 2 stanzas? Second question.... from the topics to write about, can we combine more than one of those?

    • Asfand
      July 19, 2007
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      sorry for the LATE reply!! personal messgaes can get faster replies...

      yea, it can be more then 2 stanzas,

      actually, if thry are related you can, i want relation in all the stanzas,

      satan,
      devil,
      darkness,
      blood

      you, see they have some sort of relaton, they're all evil.....

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