I'm a tough girl

Okay if you're gonna try this, good for you.
I'm gonna tell ya up front. The computer that I can get to won't let me comment on your story. I've tried with a lot of other stories. It hates me so don't expect me to comment. Oh by the way if you think this is a stupid contest I don't care. I'm board and I'll do what I please. I'm confident that I will like it as long as you follow these instructions. I know for a fact I'll like it if you follow these instructions.

1. I will let anything slide. I don't care what it is. You can cuss and put things that would be rated R in movies. I don't care.

2. Nobody has made me cry. I've had things happen to me that would make other people cry. So I don't cry for nothing. All you have to do is make me cry

3. I want a character description before you start a story. I want to understand the person and if you have a picture of the person that's good to. You can give me that as well.

4. Keep it under 2000 words

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on August 2, 2007
• Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 10, Bronze: 5
• Final notes:
  Contest judged by Moderator Manager, based on placement by contest host.

Contest Winners

1. Krystal No Subakus Past {A Longer Version}

   Krystals description. / Cold,hatefilled.Shes becoming the strongest she can be to defeat her father.Many in her own village hate her as some in Konohagakure do.Many love her though and she loves them back.Dak purple ey

   by Sinned Alchemist 500 words, on Jun 16 4:52 PM 2007. In Contest, Gaara, Krystal, Krystals past, Sad, Temari, Whatever
   Gold trophy winner

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2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 87775, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
3. Hands, Sunshine Hair and Safe Flying

   A long time ago, when for the first time I discovered the sky was blue, I remember my brother Daniel brought a friend home. / Daniel's frie

   by k8fairy 1300 words, 12 comments, on Jun 5 12:10 AM 2007. In First person, Innocent, Love
   Bronze trophy winner

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4. Suicidal

   by sly fox 1500 words, 44 comments, on Jun 15 3:33 PM 2007. In Dark, First person, Inspirational, Sad, Short story, Young adult

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5. A Simple Story

   A Simple Story / / “Life is a miracle in itself” / / A perfect life is only some one could hope for in today’s world people have it in th

   by Mohd 1900 words, 9 comments, on May 15 5:59 PM 2007. In Depression, Inspirational, Life, Love, Romance, Short story, Spiritua

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Entries [13]

• “Visit me at least once a year”

  • Summer has come and passed / Autumn came left trees undressed / Winter in snow and cold / My life I can no longer hold / Soon it will fro

  by bedovich 200 words, 6 comments, on Jun 4 2:37 PM 2007. In , Dark, Death, Depression, Love, Pain, Personal, Poem, Poetry, Romance, Sad, Teen

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• Bodybuilder

  BODYBUILDER / By Robert Davidson / ‘Can I give you a hand with those boxes?’ / The upstairs flat had been let at last and

  by robert davidson 4600 words, 2 comments, on Oct 9 6:03 AM 2007. In Life, Love, Romance, Short story

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• Where there is no darkness

  by itsjustme 500 words, 19 comments, on Jun 16 4:37 PM 2007. In , Dark, Depression, Third person

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• The Sweet Succor of Pain

  by Delfishie 800 words, 15 comments, on Apr 2 7:48 PM 2007. In Angst, Crime, Dark, Death, Depression, Drugs, First person, Pain, Sad

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• Rope-a-Dope

  by The Racing Snake 1300 words, 33 comments, on Mar 1 4:15 AM 2007. In Humor

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• Faith

  / / Faith / / Ten paces. That’s how many steps it took Tara to reach one end of the softly lit waiting room to the other. Up. Down.

  by Kat222 2200 words, 11 comments, on Apr 25 6:42 AM 2007

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• The Bashing Buns Of Steel (part 1)

  by blink-182 200 words, 5 comments, on Feb 11 3:16 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Humor

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• Nine Days

  ::: *Day 1* ::: / “When I started high school, I was fourteen with the height of 5’ 5”, weighing at 131 lbs. Boys made fun of me saying how fat I was, and laughing at everything I ate. That summer, I began to be so pic

  by On.Cue 1700 words, 23 comments, on Feb 9 8:50 PM 2007. In Anorexia, Bulimia, Death, Sad

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Comments

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  Token Massacre
  June 17, 2007
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  it's very difficult to build a character and do a good story that would make someone cry, in less than 2000 words...