New Moon

Hi there, as we all know the new movie of the Twilight Saga -New Moon is opening in a couple weeks and I thought of doing a contest for the Twilight fans...

The contest is fairly simple, you have to re-write a scene from the book,and let Jacob have his way with Bella...

Your story have to include the follow excerpt from the book and continue forward with the new ending.

Here is the excerpt:

New Moon By Stephenie Meyer

Chapter 18- THE FUNERAL

....We stared at each other for a long moment.His hand smoldered against my skin. In my face, I knew there was nothing but wistful sadness-- I didn't want to have to say goodbye now, no matter for how short a time. At first his face reflected mine, but then, as neither of us looked away, his expression changed.

He released me, lifting his other hand to brush his fingertips along my cheek, trailing them down to my jaw. I could feel his fingers tremble-- not with anger this time.
He pressed his palm against my cheek, so that my face was trapped between his burning hands.

"Bella",he wispered.

I was frozen.

No! I hadn't make that decision yet. I didn't know if i could do this, and now I was out of time to think. But I would have been a fool if I thought rejecting him now would have no consequences.
I stared back at him. he was not my Jacob, but he could be. His face was familiar and beloved. In so many real ways, I did live him. He was my comfort, my safe harbor. Right now, I could choose to have him belong to me.

Alice was back for the moment, but that changed nothing. true love was forever lost. The prince was never coming back to kiss me awake from my enchanted sleep. I was not princess, after all. So what was the fairy-tale protocol for other kisses? The mundane kind that didn't break any spells?

Maybe it would be easy--like holding his hand or having his arms around me. Maybe it would feel nice. Maybe it wouldn't feel like a betrayal. Besides, who was I betraying anyway? Just myself.

Keeping his eyes on mine, Jacob began to bend his face toward me. And I was still absolutely undecided.

 

Copy and paste the excerpt along with the author credits to your story and continue on with your version... have fun and good luck!





 

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on November 23
  • Rewards: Gold: 150, Silver: 50, Bronze: 20, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    Hi there, thank you all for entering the contest, here are the Judging notes...

    Paris- Gold, for creativity and for sticking with the essence of the books and yet leting Jacob have his way with Bella.

    Solar Eclipse- Silver, for your originality and surprising ending.

    New Moon- Bronze, for the nice ending and flow of the story.

    Congrats to all winners !!!

    Honorable mention: The new New Moon- very sweet...

Contest Winners

  1. My take on chapter 18 of New Moon..
    by HaydenLautner 2100 words, 9 comments, on Nov 22 8:29 AM. In New moon
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. MY SUCKY FANFICTION! lol
    by StarOfDreams23 600 words, 10 comments, on Nov 8 11:31 PM. In Fanfitction, Romance
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. Chapter 18- THE FUNERAL1
    by Wavering Dreams 500 words, 1 comment, on Nov 21 8:14 PM
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. You have to read it to find out!
    by storyspinner 400 words, 2 comments, on Nov 18 5:22 PM. In Fantasy, Romance, Teen, Vampires, Warewolfs
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

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  • HaydenLautner
    November 8
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    I am sooo entering this.. Yay!! A reason to write more fanfiction!!
    Thank you!!!
    BOOKMARKED!!!


  • Anti Creative
    November 8
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    Erm..Isn't it technically illegal? Since anything posted on the internet technically IS published -- & her book is already published as well as copyright, & attempting to rewrite is plagiarism..

    Unless people just use the idea instead of actually rewriting it..


    • HaydenLautner
      November 8
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      I think she means fanfiction. You know what you wish it could happen. Thats what I'm guessing


    • Crys Moro
      November 8
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      This a fanfiction contest...

      The idea is to get people to write what they wish it would happen if the characters of the book have chosen different paths than the one originaly writen by the Author... I guess that "re-write" is not the right term to use here.
      I have no intention of plagiarism, the one reason I've requested that all entries should have the Author credit posted along with the excerpt from the book, followed by their continuation of what they expcted or wished that would happen in the original story.


  • StarOfDreams23
    November 8
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    I love this idea! Can I reserve? I am about to go to bed, but I'll write it after school! Promise!!!!!! ^w^


  • ForTheLoveOfBooks silver member
    November 10
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    I'm so going to try to enter!
    I've only done one fan fic though so sorry if it sucks monkey butt lol
    Bookmarked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Glad there is a twilight contest on here ^_^

  • ForTheLoveOfBooks silver member
    November 22
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    It's closed I was looking forward to entering just been really really busy so haven't finished mine...all well
    Good luck judging it!

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