Ok so I read my sister a little thing I made up and she wanted more but unfortunatly I'm in my medievil mood so I cannot finish this piece! But I really want to see how anyone else would finish it!!!! so here are the rules!!!
RULES BREAK EM AND I'LL EAT YOU AND DQ UR STORY
#1 absolutley posotivley no swearing at all!!!
#2 NO SEXUALY CONTANT
#3 You can change the story up a little bit but please try to keep to what I wrote my sister really liked it!
#4 have fun and be creative!
#5 1000 words limit
HERE IS THE STORY!!!
Jamie Garsia was walking down the school halls with the twelve books she had to do a report on. Jackson Andrews and his little possy were laughing at something that she was apperiantly doing. "Nice shirt" said one of the girls hanging on Jackson's arm. Jamie smiled "Thank you" she didn't really think she had a nice shirt, they were problably making fun of her. She didn't care she new who she was. Jamie noticed they were still watching her. And so was this other guy in a hoodie leaning on his locker. When jamie twisted her lock on her locker she hurd them hold there breath. She tried to ignore them and then... Red paint came flying from her locker and all over Jamie. "I dind't think it would work!" said Ryan Baker laughing all over Jackson's shirt. "I think you spilt something" Jackson almost fell over he was laughing so hard. "You think that's funny?" the guy in the hoodie stood right in Jackson's face. "What do you care punk? And get out of my face" Jackson pushed him. The guy grabbed Jackson by his shirt and slammed him against the locker. " You like picking on girls?" The guy through Jackson on the floor. "Well so do I" The guy made his way to Jamie "You ok?" He rapped his arm around the girl covered in red paint. Jamie was hopeing he wouldn't see her tears. "I'm fine, thank you" Jamie looked at her red hands. "You got somthing to change in?" He said walking her outside the school. Jamie shook her head. "Well you can wear my shirt in my car" Jamie saw his chevy cemaro. "What's you name?" She looked up at him her face covered in paint. "Allen, and I know yours. Your Jamie Garsia" He gave her some sweats and his shirt. Jamie looked at the clothes. Allen laughed. "Don't worry they are clean" Jamie attpeted to wipe some of the red paint off. "I have to go shower and make it too my English class" 1
"Ok I'll see you later" he smiled and leaned on his car and watched her walk away. Allen was going to the bathroom to clean his jacket from the red paint. When he left the bathroom he looked up the hall and saw her books on the floor covered in paint. He tryed to find one the wasn't covered in paint but they all were ruined. Allen took them to Miss Victoria. "Yes how can I help you Allen?" Allen set the books that he attempted to clean on the desk. "What store can I buy these from?" Miss. Victoria looked at the books. "These books cost 80 dollars each! How did you ruin them?" 2
"I spilt something. Where can I buy them?" He said tapping his nails against the glass. "Uhh you can buy them on the other side of campus. Allen left in a flash. At his locker he made a note of the books then threw them in the trash.3
Jamie had her ruined clothes in a bag and had on Allen's giant ones. She jsut remembered her books. "Oh no they are problably ruined" Jamie walked fastly to her locker and didn't expect to see the paint cleaned up. She looked around then opened her locker to find her books... No new books cleaned and neatly in her locker. 4
Allen wacthed her shocked expression. He smiled then went into his math class.
HAVE FUN!!!!!! AND T WOULD BE SOOOO FUNNY IF A A GUY ENTERED I LOVE WHEN GUYS WRITE ROMANTIC STUFF IT MAKES ME LAUGH!
RULES BREAK EM AND I'LL EAT YOU AND DQ UR STORY
#1 absolutley posotivley no swearing at all!!!
#2 NO SEXUALY CONTANT
#3 You can change the story up a little bit but please try to keep to what I wrote my sister really liked it!
#4 have fun and be creative!
#5 1000 words limit
HERE IS THE STORY!!!
Jamie Garsia was walking down the school halls with the twelve books she had to do a report on. Jackson Andrews and his little possy were laughing at something that she was apperiantly doing. "Nice shirt" said one of the girls hanging on Jackson's arm. Jamie smiled "Thank you" she didn't really think she had a nice shirt, they were problably making fun of her. She didn't care she new who she was. Jamie noticed they were still watching her. And so was this other guy in a hoodie leaning on his locker. When jamie twisted her lock on her locker she hurd them hold there breath. She tried to ignore them and then... Red paint came flying from her locker and all over Jamie. "I dind't think it would work!" said Ryan Baker laughing all over Jackson's shirt. "I think you spilt something" Jackson almost fell over he was laughing so hard. "You think that's funny?" the guy in the hoodie stood right in Jackson's face. "What do you care punk? And get out of my face" Jackson pushed him. The guy grabbed Jackson by his shirt and slammed him against the locker. " You like picking on girls?" The guy through Jackson on the floor. "Well so do I" The guy made his way to Jamie "You ok?" He rapped his arm around the girl covered in red paint. Jamie was hopeing he wouldn't see her tears. "I'm fine, thank you" Jamie looked at her red hands. "You got somthing to change in?" He said walking her outside the school. Jamie shook her head. "Well you can wear my shirt in my car" Jamie saw his chevy cemaro. "What's you name?" She looked up at him her face covered in paint. "Allen, and I know yours. Your Jamie Garsia" He gave her some sweats and his shirt. Jamie looked at the clothes. Allen laughed. "Don't worry they are clean" Jamie attpeted to wipe some of the red paint off. "I have to go shower and make it too my English class" 1
"Ok I'll see you later" he smiled and leaned on his car and watched her walk away. Allen was going to the bathroom to clean his jacket from the red paint. When he left the bathroom he looked up the hall and saw her books on the floor covered in paint. He tryed to find one the wasn't covered in paint but they all were ruined. Allen took them to Miss Victoria. "Yes how can I help you Allen?" Allen set the books that he attempted to clean on the desk. "What store can I buy these from?" Miss. Victoria looked at the books. "These books cost 80 dollars each! How did you ruin them?" 2
"I spilt something. Where can I buy them?" He said tapping his nails against the glass. "Uhh you can buy them on the other side of campus. Allen left in a flash. At his locker he made a note of the books then threw them in the trash.3
Jamie had her ruined clothes in a bag and had on Allen's giant ones. She jsut remembered her books. "Oh no they are problably ruined" Jamie walked fastly to her locker and didn't expect to see the paint cleaned up. She looked around then opened her locker to find her books... No new books cleaned and neatly in her locker. 4
Allen wacthed her shocked expression. He smiled then went into his math class.
HAVE FUN!!!!!! AND T WOULD BE SOOOO FUNNY IF A A GUY ENTERED I LOVE WHEN GUYS WRITE ROMANTIC STUFF IT MAKES ME LAUGH!
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Jamie sat in her english class, they were supposed to being working on a test. But she just couldn't concentrate, she kept thinking about Aby Xithen Reux 700 words, 3 comments, on Nov 1 5:51 AM. In Contest, Hmm, Humor, Romance? kinda?, Short stor, Teen• Commented on by judge.
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I might enter if I have enough time to read the little piece you put up for us to continue off and if I have the time to write ^^
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I will enter as soon as I read more of it,
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I AM TOTALLY WRITING THIS! ^w^ And yes I am a guy. So do we put hat part of the story in with what we write or what?
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I can't do this >_>




