Well yeah, it's what the title suggests, I need a title for something I wrote some time ago. The story isn't neccessarily great but nevertheless I'd still like a title hence this contest.
Brief summary:
About a 17yr old chick named Billie- Mexican, lives with her mom and brother- Nathaniel who she loves despite his several attempts at giving her a haemorrage.
They've moved from Mexico due to security problems they've faced from a father that left them distraught and bereaving after his early departure from their lives.
Now after several years in, having moved to Texas recently she's the new kid. And on her first day she manages to piss off the moodie hottie, who has a few secrets of his own.
Morevover, as she comes into her new life her dreams become even more intriguing so, as she views strange rituals, including a shaman and the witch trials...so she's become best friends with the guy who she first diagnosed with PMS, she's joined a band, threw a chair at the substitute teacher who dared talk about her dad and her mom won't explain the meaning behind all the mystery. Go figure.
I think you might get the gist of where this is headed now, i've updated the former contest as i was told it sounded too much like a promotion.
Btw it's preferable for the title to be short, so please don't let the title be a dramatic monologue
Oh and this is my first comp. so forgive me if I take some time to figure this whole system out. Thanks.
Brief summary:
About a 17yr old chick named Billie- Mexican, lives with her mom and brother- Nathaniel who she loves despite his several attempts at giving her a haemorrage.
They've moved from Mexico due to security problems they've faced from a father that left them distraught and bereaving after his early departure from their lives.
Now after several years in, having moved to Texas recently she's the new kid. And on her first day she manages to piss off the moodie hottie, who has a few secrets of his own.
Morevover, as she comes into her new life her dreams become even more intriguing so, as she views strange rituals, including a shaman and the witch trials...so she's become best friends with the guy who she first diagnosed with PMS, she's joined a band, threw a chair at the substitute teacher who dared talk about her dad and her mom won't explain the meaning behind all the mystery. Go figure.
I think you might get the gist of where this is headed now, i've updated the former contest as i was told it sounded too much like a promotion.
Btw it's preferable for the title to be short, so please don't let the title be a dramatic monologue
Oh and this is my first comp. so forgive me if I take some time to figure this whole system out. Thanks.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 12
- Rewards: Gold: 100
- Final notes: Titles weren't perfect but i can see people have made an effort and that's all i can ask for, so thanks for entering
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HERE are a few titles1• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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I think the title "He was cool" fits the story because of the way Billie interacts with the attitude obsessed boy. So thats what I think• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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The Way I Was would be a good title. It could be like while telling her story now there could be flashbacks to her past that lead to this.• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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I'd remove the link to the story if I were you.
That counts as outright promotion, which isn't allowed in contests. Just the little paragraph about the story is fine.
- HT
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