I want to be in tears! Make me sob for more!
1: Friends back-stabbing.
2: Depression.
3: Acts of suicide.
4: Anger! Refuses to call your mom mother.
5: Love betrayal!
I want anything and everything that would make anyone cry! But! I have this itty-bitty piece of advice. Don't over do it please. I hate the cleashay, "My life is over! I will kill myself!" I want you to describe the pain. The misery. The breaking down of your body. I want you....to be the character. Tell me what you are feeling. Heck! Make me be the character. Make me feel like them. Make me feel their pain. Now, yes, I got some ways for you to make some brownie points.
Brownie points:
1: Make the character different from the norm. Really ill and will die. Handicapped. Make them different.
2: Make a love story where I cry for the cheater. I know, you all are going, hu? I've seen it where all the cheaters tells their old lovers that they are pathetic and useless. So, we all cry for them. I want something different. I want to be crying for the cheater. You don't have to do this, but this is something you can do for deffinant brownie points.
3: I want to see where a pregnant wife is living alone after witnessing her husband's death. Make me cry of her pain. Either she doesn't want the child or does. It's your choice.
7: Give me story of a suicidal person. How they felt. Scared? Enraged? Tell me.
Now, I don't support any of these. A.K.A. I don't really like the idea of someone wanting to kill themselves. This is just a contest. Now, the rules!
Rules:
1: Keep it pg15. I can't read adults.
2: At least 500-3,000. A little under or a little above doesn't hurt.
3: Gay is allowed.
4: Fanfics are allowed. (Be careful with this one. I'm driven up the wall if a character is really out of place. A little is fine. What I mean by this, I don't want to see, 'Naruto wearing pink. Places hands on hips and giggles, "Don't you think I look sexy?"' If they act like a man, please don't make them act girlie. Please.)
5:Got to make me cry. Duh! XD
6: I got two things for you to write in your author notes.
a: I don't agree with suicide.
b: Ask me why there is a 7 and not a 4 on the brownie points list. XD And if you didn't notice, I want you to say, "Mew!" XD
7: Have fun! I want to see smiles after this! =^^=
If I'm able, I will add more points. Maybe. If I remember. If you guys got any questions, feel free to ask. =^^= (Maybe my next contest will deal with making me laugh.) Enjoy!
1: Friends back-stabbing.
2: Depression.
3: Acts of suicide.
4: Anger! Refuses to call your mom mother.
5: Love betrayal!
I want anything and everything that would make anyone cry! But! I have this itty-bitty piece of advice. Don't over do it please. I hate the cleashay, "My life is over! I will kill myself!" I want you to describe the pain. The misery. The breaking down of your body. I want you....to be the character. Tell me what you are feeling. Heck! Make me be the character. Make me feel like them. Make me feel their pain. Now, yes, I got some ways for you to make some brownie points.
Brownie points:
1: Make the character different from the norm. Really ill and will die. Handicapped. Make them different.
2: Make a love story where I cry for the cheater. I know, you all are going, hu? I've seen it where all the cheaters tells their old lovers that they are pathetic and useless. So, we all cry for them. I want something different. I want to be crying for the cheater. You don't have to do this, but this is something you can do for deffinant brownie points.
3: I want to see where a pregnant wife is living alone after witnessing her husband's death. Make me cry of her pain. Either she doesn't want the child or does. It's your choice.
7: Give me story of a suicidal person. How they felt. Scared? Enraged? Tell me.
Now, I don't support any of these. A.K.A. I don't really like the idea of someone wanting to kill themselves. This is just a contest. Now, the rules!
Rules:
1: Keep it pg15. I can't read adults.
2: At least 500-3,000. A little under or a little above doesn't hurt.
3: Gay is allowed.
4: Fanfics are allowed. (Be careful with this one. I'm driven up the wall if a character is really out of place. A little is fine. What I mean by this, I don't want to see, 'Naruto wearing pink. Places hands on hips and giggles, "Don't you think I look sexy?"' If they act like a man, please don't make them act girlie. Please.)
5:Got to make me cry. Duh! XD
6: I got two things for you to write in your author notes.
a: I don't agree with suicide.
b: Ask me why there is a 7 and not a 4 on the brownie points list. XD And if you didn't notice, I want you to say, "Mew!" XD
7: Have fun! I want to see smiles after this! =^^=
If I'm able, I will add more points. Maybe. If I remember. If you guys got any questions, feel free to ask. =^^= (Maybe my next contest will deal with making me laugh.) Enjoy!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 7
- Rewards: Gold: 147, Silver: 100, Bronze: 43, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Man, it was realy hard to judge this contest. I was like a little kid in a candy store. I had so much wonderful stories to pick from, yet I just couldn't decide. I finally found out the ones that realy stood out. Wonderful! I wish I was able to giv all you guys a trophy, but I just don't got that much points. You all did wonderful and I thank you all for making this contest worth while. All you writers were just wonderful! =^^=
Contest Winners
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by Melancholic Smile 3500 words, 16 comments, on Aug 10 8:42 AM. In Death, Depression, Fiction, Pain, Sad, Suicide, Teen
Gold trophy winner
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Emily was an imp. It took us a while to figure that out; about six months. Our first child, so naturally we wanted as much documentation asby JJBanReo 1300 words, 38 comments, on Dec 27 2:10 PM 2008. In First person, Love
Silver trophy winner
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by SilentMoonDance 2000 words, 7 comments, on Oct 11 10:07 AM. In Fiction, Romance, Tragedy, Young adult
Honorable mention
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by Incroyable 900 words, 4 comments, on Jun 2 8:09 PM. In Depression, Inspirational, Life, Love, Romance, Young adult Honorable mention
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The door to the bathroom clicked quietly behind him, nearly unheard over the thumping of his heart beat. The walls of the tiny bathroom wer• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Bronze trophy winner
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In a foreign field he lay, Lonely soldier, unknown grave, On his dying words he prays, Tell the world of Paschendaleby Lithron 1300 words, 50 comments, on Jun 8 4:00 AM. In Dark, Death, Depression, Drama, Fiction, First person, Horror, Sad, Short story, War• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The big bus pulled to that sidewalk Josie had known all her life. She snorted in disgust at the boys in the back and hurried over the legsby CheshireCat 1400 words, 4 comments, on Jun 9 5:54 PM. In Angst, Dark, Drama, Fiction, Hope, Life, Pain, Sad, Storywrite• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Lost Soul 12 500 words, 17 comments, on Oct 18 7:15 PM. In Depression, Fiction, Sad, Tragedy, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I was the apple of my daddys eye until I turned eleven, after that I was a woman and he looked at me as if I was dirty and good for nothing• Commented on by judge.
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by Fayeriene South 800 words, 9 comments, on Sep 24 6:49 PM. In Contest, Crime, Dark, Death, Depression, Fiction, Horror, Pain, Sad, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by CrystalFairyWings 500 words, 11 comments, on Oct 24 12:27 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I am nearly 53 soon. My name is JoXXe,, which I hate so much. If it was only Jo it would have been alright. My mum wanted to change my nameby Sareeta 500 words, 1 comment, on Oct 28 5:46 PM
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Every Christmas Eve, our whole family (parents, brother, aunts, uncles, cousins, Grandfather and grandmother) would gather together to celebrate. It was usually an elaborate event with all the parents bringing gifts for thei• Commented on by judge.
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“What?” Aunt Chloe moaned in the blinding darkness. Uncle Rod mumbled something, a low vibration on the walls. I lay still in my invisible room, barely breathing, for fear they hear me so much as sigh.1by Olinda 300 words, 17 comments, on Sep 12 6:04 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Have you ever lost someone you cherished with all your heart?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Why did he do this to me? He said he loved me and wanted to marry me. How could he spend so much time with her and not care how I feel. I can not handle this with classes and moms problem. The classes are getting to much forby Danni. 600 words, 7 comments, on Oct 12 5:09 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Not many people know Jolie Witt. She grew up in Williamsport Pennsylvania. Her parents were separated so she lived with her dad. She livedby lesbian-in-love 700 words, 5 comments, on Mar 25 2:26 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I’m tired, dead tired, of being chased like this. Their coming. There’s no doubt about that. Nothing could pull me from that sobering realiby Serenity Blackheart 1000 words, 13 comments, on Oct 18 5:58 PM. In Depression, First person, Inspirational, Life, Love, Other, Tragedy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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From the darkest corners of my mind.by Unkillable Monster 1000 words, 7 comments, on Oct 19 10:23 AM. In Depression• Commented on by judge.
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What would you do if the one you were supposed to be with is suddenly, and tragically ripped out of your life? What would life be like?by Cold Wonder 1200 words, 20 comments, on Aug 27 4:26 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Disasterous-Bastard 300 words, 9 comments, on Oct 17 1:28 PM. In Emo, Life, Pregnancy, Romance, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A man lay in a hospital bed with a mortal wound sleeping when a flashed appeared before him. Looking up the man saw what seemed to be an angel next to his bed with a quiet smile on his face. The angel asked him was he the man• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The ghost of Maria Lewis haunted the mansion and cast shadows upon the yellowing walls.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The torment ripped at his heart as he looked into the dieing eyes of the one he loved. He held her in his arms as her blood, her life's ess• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by ExpectingMommy18 500 words, 4 comments, on Oct 29 9:45 PM. In Dark, First person, Hmm, Life, Other, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'm the first to view this YAY! lols.
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Lol! =^^= Cute avatare!
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Thanks. And now i am first to enter.
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Lol. Thanks for the enter! =^^=
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I don't agree with suicide.
and Mew
I dun do the authorns notes things because it takes away from my novel...sorry >.< but here they are
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I don't either... but I do write about it a lot. Possibly the only reason I'm still here to say this is because I'm anti-suicide.
Will definitely consider entering.
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Hail to all anit-suicides! I reaaaly have a problem with suicide. Hearing about it makes me want to cry for the person. Thinking of it makes me soooo scared my strength sucks out of my lags.
Hope to have ya enter! =^^=
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I also hope you dun get totally confused...but this is the most tear jerking chapter I have, it made me bawl my eyes out writting it >.<
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That's OK about not putting the authore notes in your novel. Me understand. Atleast you told me. And, don't worry about me getting confused. I loooove reading, so if I don't understand, I will read the other chapters. All matters in this contest is to make me cry. =^^=
Thanks for adding your story! =^^=
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I read the rules!! (my story was Tiger)
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OK, thanks. I'll read and comment on your story. =^^=
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Hiya...
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Howdy! =^^=
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hi yoko!
i wanted to tell you that i can't write anything in AN because i am not a gold member anymore and if i edit it now, the whole thing will be ruined up.
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That's OK. I understand. Thanks for telling me. =^^=
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Hey done it.
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Why is there a 7 and not a 4 in the brownie points?
"mew"
If you do not mind, I would rather not put this sort of thing in my AN, I feel it may detract from the story. If this is unacceptable then please dq me.
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No, typing it here is just fine. =^^=
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MEW!!!!!
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Lmao! XD
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