The title pretty much explains the details for this contest. I'm going to allow everyone to enter almost anything they like. The entire focus of this contest is comments. I will read and comment/critique everything.
This is what I will be critiquing on:
1 Characterization
2 plot
3 Emotion
4 Grammar/spelling
5 Dialogue
6 Organization
7 Your 1st paragraph (which includes your hook, introduction of your theme)
*Disclaimer: This contest is for those who want critiques. If you do not wish for me to critique your story or you are someone who is 'comment sensitive' then this contest may not be for you. I will give you my honest opinion of your work and point out any errors or places in need of improvement if I notice any.
Rules
1. No text or script writing
2. No fan fiction allowed. Your entry must be your original work.
3. The MINIMUM word count is 500 words (I will not move on that). There is no MAXimum.
4. Do not submit any works that have been in any of my previous contests. Not following this rule will be an automatic DQ, no notification since I am assuming you will read the rules before entering my contest.
This is what I will be critiquing on:
1 Characterization
2 plot
3 Emotion
4 Grammar/spelling
5 Dialogue
6 Organization
7 Your 1st paragraph (which includes your hook, introduction of your theme)
*Disclaimer: This contest is for those who want critiques. If you do not wish for me to critique your story or you are someone who is 'comment sensitive' then this contest may not be for you. I will give you my honest opinion of your work and point out any errors or places in need of improvement if I notice any.
Rules
1. No text or script writing
2. No fan fiction allowed. Your entry must be your original work.
3. The MINIMUM word count is 500 words (I will not move on that). There is no MAXimum.
4. Do not submit any works that have been in any of my previous contests. Not following this rule will be an automatic DQ, no notification since I am assuming you will read the rules before entering my contest.
Closed for judging
- Closed for judging on October 30
- Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 50, Bronze: 25
Entries [44]
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August 17, 20211
by Adinatak 1200 words, 15 comments, on May 15 11:48 AM. In Dark, Fiction, First person, Short story• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Screams tore through the air as women helplessly watched their children get slaughtered in cold blood.
Their screams didn't last long.
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He's a very literal kinda guy.• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The sun was just beginning to peak it's bright face between the snowy tops of the twin mountains, as I paced in front of the airport window• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Fourteen-year-old Emily Linkheart is not allowed to go outside of her house, all because of her mother's sin: she killed Emily's father andby Schuyler VanAlen 2000 words, 55 comments, on Aug 13 3:09 PM. In Angst, Contest, First person, Love, Pain, Romance, Young adul• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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THE LAST STAND / On the corner of 178th Street and Fort Washington Avenue, diagonally across the street from the old YMWHA, on whose site i• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Dearest Leo,2by CallMeWhenUrRich 500 words, 6 comments, on Sep 24 9:37 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
“What?” Aunt Chloe moaned in the blinding darkness. Uncle Rod mumbled something, a low vibration on the walls. I lay still in my invisible room, barely breathing, for fear they hear me so much as sigh.1by Olinda 300 words, 17 comments, on Sep 12 6:04 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The greatest playwright and actor in Evyntyde's history has a few lessons to learn, despite his fame and self-assurance.• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Quest of the Fire Crystal Part 1by Mistress Cheetah 1600 words, 11 comments, on Sep 30 5:51 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Chapter 2 - In Which There Is A Dragonby Armaan 6500 words, on Sep 28 7:56 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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All things must end to start again.by Valkyrie 900 words, 56 comments, on Sep 5 7:41 PM 2008. In Contest, Historical fiction, Poem, Short story
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by Lithron 1500 words, 17 comments, on Sep 7 7:17 PM. In Adult, Dark, Fantasy, Fiction, Horror, Romance, Short story, Starting idea, Vampire• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A work-in-progress... Suggestion on how to expand would be very welcome!by Vanilla King 700 words, 31 comments, on Sep 28 7:37 PM. In Can't say more without spoiling, Dark, Fiction• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The day was as many other days in the Violet Park. The sky was clear blue, temperature still warm for the time of the year.by Luci Ferraris 1200 words, 7 comments, on Jul 3 12:17 AM. In Romance• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The torment ripped at his heart as he looked into the dieing eyes of the one he loved. He held her in his arms as her blood, her life's ess• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Shadow Pixie 2100 words, 38 comments, on Sep 27 10:15 AM. In Dark, Fiction, Romance, Supernatural, Young adult• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Chapter one... the destruction.• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by StarOfDreams23 1000 words, 6 comments, on Sep 29 9:51 PM. In Dark, Death, Depression, Fiction, First person, Horror, Love, Murder, Pain• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A paper bag, a business card, and a key. No big deal, right? Wrong.by InBetweenDays 800 words, 11 comments, on Sep 17 5:44 PM. In Crime, Dark, Drama, Fiction, Hmm, Murder, Other, Short story• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Action filled SWAT mission. My first short story.by ZackTruel 1900 words, 29 comments, on Aug 2 1:17 PM. In Action, Crime, Fiction, Short story, Third person• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The air was cold, freezing you could say, the branches of the trees were moving and some leaves landed on the muddy ground. I was behind aby Stars-are-Blind93 1000 words, 19 comments, on Feb 26 8:04 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Molly Anne held close to the trigger. 'This is the last time...' her heart pounded in her chest. It was like an earthquake. He turned the cby Oleander 400 words, 2 comments, on Oct 7 3:01 AM• Not viewed by judge.
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Herbert tried something new and was glad he'd taken the risk.• Not viewed by judge.
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(A story that I had lost interest in, in my early writing days.)• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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She said let's change our luck1by Hyperbole 800 words, 9 comments, on Jul 10 10:27 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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affeine, nicotine, solitude: these were the things Chris craved. The cold, empty, metal elevator welcomed him...by JimZombie 1200 words, 5 comments, on Apr 28 11:43 PM. In Creative fiction, Dark, Depression, Personal, Third person• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Shine on, my little star. Move on, my wind. A tragedy has struck today. Please, oh please, go away.• Not viewed by judge.
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A light summer wind passed through the large pine tree that canopied over most of Sammy's backyard and swayed the branches in a rythmic pattern. Samantha closed her eyes and slowly moved the swing she was sitting on.1by hyperactive1344 3200 words, 1 comment, on Sep 21 8:38 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by alternrockerchick 600 words, 8 comments, on Apr 11 12:10 PM. In Fantasy, Fiction, Magic, School, Young adult• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'm trapped in this dead world. Forever.by Marisalyn13 5900 words, 5 comments, on Jun 29 6:47 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Skip454 4000 words, on Oct 15 7:32 PM. In Science fiction• Not viewed by judge.
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Heaven? Reincarnation? You wish!
by Go Go Inaro-Lily 700 words, 12 comments, on Oct 20 7:38 AM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Jack thought it was just another harmless night drinking. That was until the only friends he knew burned to death that night....by Kaoticstrife 800 words, 5 comments, on Oct 21 1:26 AM. In Fiction• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Eddie 3400 words, 3 comments, on Oct 19 9:14 PM. In Drama, Fiction, Gay, Hope, Inspirational, Pain, Romance, Teen, Young adult• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Ghost of a Siren 5700 words, 2 comments, on Oct 25 10:21 PM. In Fantasy, Romance, Science fiction, Third person, Young adult• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I shook with fear, seeing his snout and then his eyes looking up at me. I kicked him in the nose, screaming and shoving my way out of the bby MartialDemon 600 words, 15 comments, on Oct 27 3:49 PM. In Death, Drama, Fantasy, First person, Hope, Mystery, Other, Romance• Not viewed by judge.
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Night had set in, the towns in the forests in the valley below lighted by the hearth inside. It protected them from the night air, slowly gby Reigning Fire 1100 words, 7 comments, on Oct 20 1:30 PM. In Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Fiction, Third person• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Is this a story-only contest or may I enter a poem? coz I really want some critiques on it. And if you're allowing it, 500 words for a poem is preeetty difficult...
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Well, I wanted to keep it mainly a story contest since some of the things I'm critiquing on won't apply for poems. However, since I didn't really say you couldn't enter a poem...loop hole.
The word requirements for a poem will be 75-100 words.
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