This contest pretty much speaks for itself. I am allowing you to enter anything your little hearts' desire.
I'm not going to be too picky and create lots of rules, but I do have a couple that you have to abide by since I'm being so lenient.
Rules
1. No text or chat speak
2. No plays or script form
3. The minimum word count is 500 (I will not move on this). There is no maximum.
4. If you enter a fan fiction then you must leave me a comment below containing the name of your story and the story/movie that you based your story off of. (I will go ahead and say that fan fictions will have a disadvantage in this contest if you enter something that I have never seen or read before).
5. If you enter erotica, BDSM, etc then please make sure you label your story correctly...as 'adult'.
6. Your story must not be or have been entered in any of my other contests! I say this because I comment on all entries and I would rather not read something I've already read and commented on.
Other
1. I will have an OPTIONAL grading scale for those of you who want your writing critiqued. If you would like me to do this for your story then please leave a comment below containing: your name, the name of your story, and a 'Yes, I would like you to critique my story'.
The grading scale for those who desire it, is as follows:
plot structure
description
title
characterization
emotion
other literary elements (an example of this is a symbol, theme(s), etc.)
Remember that is optional.
I will be commenting on every entry, but the comments that include the 'critique' are only given if you leave the necessary comment below.
Other than that, if you have any questions then please let me know in a comment or by message. I will try to respond as soon as possible.
Lastly, HAVE FUN!
I'm not going to be too picky and create lots of rules, but I do have a couple that you have to abide by since I'm being so lenient.
Rules
1. No text or chat speak
2. No plays or script form
3. The minimum word count is 500 (I will not move on this). There is no maximum.
4. If you enter a fan fiction then you must leave me a comment below containing the name of your story and the story/movie that you based your story off of. (I will go ahead and say that fan fictions will have a disadvantage in this contest if you enter something that I have never seen or read before).
5. If you enter erotica, BDSM, etc then please make sure you label your story correctly...as 'adult'.
6. Your story must not be or have been entered in any of my other contests! I say this because I comment on all entries and I would rather not read something I've already read and commented on.
Other
1. I will have an OPTIONAL grading scale for those of you who want your writing critiqued. If you would like me to do this for your story then please leave a comment below containing: your name, the name of your story, and a 'Yes, I would like you to critique my story'.
The grading scale for those who desire it, is as follows:
plot structure
description
title
characterization
emotion
other literary elements (an example of this is a symbol, theme(s), etc.)
Remember that is optional.
I will be commenting on every entry, but the comments that include the 'critique' are only given if you leave the necessary comment below.
Other than that, if you have any questions then please let me know in a comment or by message. I will try to respond as soon as possible.
Lastly, HAVE FUN!
Enter this contest
- This is an anonymous contest - your name will be hidden from editors
- Closes in 2 days
- Up to 2 entries are allowed per person.
- Rewards - Gold: 200, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Enter a pre-written story
- Enter a new story
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I looked into her eyes and I knew things weren’t the same. The smile that used to brighten up her face whenever I came into her view rarelyby citcat 1000 words, 23 comments, on Apr 20 4:13 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Lydia Howard lived alone - with her cat as company. But what would happen to convince her that she wasn't entirely alone?by tallblondie 3900 words, 28 comments, on Apr 17 3:11 AM. In Creepy, Horror, Mystery, Psychological• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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At the end of his day, Tony liked to do nothing more than to sit and peacefully read the paper. That was, until someone asked him the time.• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by therenaissancegirl 1000 words, 14 comments, on Jul 29 2:49 PM. In Adult, Contest, Fiction, First person, Love, Romance• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by therenaissancegirl 700 words, 40 comments, on Aug 8 1:20 PM. In Contest, Crime, Fiction, First person, Gore, Young adult• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Aspasia77 3300 words, 43 comments, on Jul 8 5:10 PM. In Adult, Cannibalism, Dolcett, Explicit, Fantasy, Fiction, Horror, Science fiction• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The night was young. It was only a few hours after the darkness had consumed the sky with a black blanket and hid the sun until dawn. A thoby Iris Doyle 500 words, 14 comments, on Sep 20 8:32 PM 2008. In Fantasy, First person, Longing, Starting idea• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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they knew it from the day that they met- something hung between them-something like a glittering waterfall or a precious 1
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by ProjectPromises 700 words, 4 comments, on Jul 16 9:15 AM. In Angst, Inspirational, Life, Love, Other, Romance, Sad, Society, Teen• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Johnathan had been a servant in that house ever since he was a young boy. He and his family were poor and had to work hard for little money for Mistress Sara. Johnathan had not seen his parents or his two sisters for a long tby CheshireCat 4800 words, 6 comments, on Jul 23 10:09 PM. In Death, Fiction, Horror, Paranormal ghosts historical fi, Spiritual• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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She looked behind her as she continued to run down the deserted street. Her breathing got harsh as she saw him chasing after her. Somethi• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A father tries to explain to his two sons the truth about sex and babies but nothing works out
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Shiara stepped out into the cold air. The moon was shining far above her head, farther then was imaginable. She gazed up at it in wonder. H• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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about everyone who forgot. that want to remember.by Delsia Malfoy 900 words, 5 comments, on Jul 11 1:11 PM. In Family, Happy, Inspirational, Life, Other, Personal, Sad• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Arril Quillan's dreams of the future are dashed when the emperor of Neir Annacht kidnaps his beloved--and no one raises a hand to stop him!• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Action filled SWAT mission. My first short story.by ZackTruel 1900 words, 28 comments, on Aug 2 1:17 PM. In Action, Crime, Fiction, Short story, Third person• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Screams tore through the air as women helplessly watched their children get slaughtered in cold blood.
Their screams didn't last long.
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by Neomaxizoondweebie 1000 words, 50 comments, on Mar 20 9:14 PM. In Fantasy, Romance, Teen, Vampire, Young adult• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Xx4everMusicxX 2300 words, 31 comments, on Apr 15 6:19 PM. In Action, Fantasy, Fiction, First person, Novel, Young adult• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Here is the edited first chapter- has been posted before, but now it is reposted. Come and see.
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It was a lazy summer afternoon, so I flipped on the Tri-Vid hoping to find something to amuse me. You have to remember that this was Vega P• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Miss Recondite 1100 words, 4 comments, on Aug 10 12:05 AM. In Dark, Horror, Life, Love, Romance, Young adult• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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He sat in front of his computer, staring aimlessly at the screen, just twirling his pencil in between each of his fingers. He was deep in t• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This is an incident which happened when I was a young girl of fourteen.My mind and my thought process were not mature enough to understand• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Once upon a time, it’s the start of almost every fairy tale. It gives you visions of glorious adventures, epic battles, valiant heroes, anby esimbf 200 words, 1 comment, on Jul 26 7:43 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I could not believe my eyes, it was still 9th period. Time was practically standing still as it came closer to the end. I felt somethingby esimbf 1500 words, 10 comments, on Oct 27 5:52 PM 2008• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Melancholic Smile 3500 words, 16 comments, on Aug 10 8:42 AM. In Death, Depression, Fiction, Pain, Sad, Suicide, Teen• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Kagamine Rin 600 words, 26 comments, on Jun 15 4:47 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Satan-chan 1000 words, 13 comments, on Aug 5 2:15 PM. In Rival love, Romance, School life, Young adult enemy• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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He sat alone in his cell, hands propping up a chin that begged for a shaving, back aching from the mattress that looked like the seat of aby oOSnoballsOo 500 words, 6 comments, on Jun 25 11:31 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The world is unfair--in more ways than one.by InBetweenDays 5100 words, 6 comments, on Jun 22 8:05 PM. In Crime, Hmm, Life, Murder, Mystery, Part of a series, Third person, Words• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"What kind of idiot holds eleven hostages at gun-point to avoid a rape wrap?" Follows Ethics.by InBetweenDays 5000 words, on Aug 11 9:33 AM. In Crime, Drama, Life, Murder, Mystery, Third person• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The end of a love, the end of the world.by Androgyne 2100 words, 2 comments, on Apr 15 6:54 PM. In Science fiction• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I wrote this story for a practice NAPLAN Test. Hope you like it!by NarniaKid 300 words, 1 comment, on May 15 8:17 PM. In Short story• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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ON TARGET1 / Heart opened the envelope one more time and drew out the glossy eight by ten print of Aymes. He didn’t really need to do this but Heart was nothing if not thorough. The little mans i• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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God goes through many chalenges with his creations and this poem expresses such complications.by Darkhearted 100 words, 7 comments, on May 3 12:35 AM 2008. In , God, Imagination, Inspirational, Other• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Darkhearted 900 words, 1 comment, on Oct 18 11:42 PM 2008. In Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Fiction, Other, Starting idea, Unfinished, Young adult• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Jackie shook back and forth as the car went down the bumpy dirt road. She was crammed in there like a sardine with the suitcases and bags pby CheshireCat 10300 words, 12 comments, on Jul 16 5:23 PM. In Drama, Evil, Fiction, Love, Mystery, Paranormal ghosts, Spiritual, Teen, Thriller• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by xXEternalXx 1900 words, 36 comments, on Aug 7 2:52 PM. In Dark, Fantasy, Fiction, Life, Love, Romance, Young adult• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I look through our scrapbook with smiles, laughter and tears. I hope that Heaven is an endless replaying of our life together.
by Jack Necron 500 words, 23 comments, on Jun 25 12:00 AM. In Depression, Drama, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite -
As the airplane landed, the mood was somber. Not a sound could be heard exept for the jet as it slowly turned towards the taxi way. A small• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Most people in this world, have had a moment that completely changed their outlook in life. A time when we see life one way, then all of a sudden, we see it in a different way. My life changing moment came when my grandfather• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Cruelty soars through life like the blood in my veins. Every living being is affected by it. Nothing is spared.• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The sun washes wearily across the hard pavement, on which my dusty shoes take step after tired step. The heavy newspaper bag cuts into my shoulder through my thin jacket. Yeah, it’s hard. My mother and father divorced after tby Much-Dipstick 1500 words, 29 comments, on Aug 11 7:12 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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"Katie! Come back here!" I yelled, unable to keep my voice even. "Come back! It is too dangerous! At least let me go with you!"by MusicOfTheNight9 1800 words, 8 comments, on Aug 6 1:58 AM. In Contest, Death, First person, Inspirational, Life, Tragedy• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"Renjad! Get back here!" I called in exasperation, but nothing was going to stop him now.by MusicOfTheNight9 500 words, 26 comments, on Jul 9 10:26 PM. In Life• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Ghost of a Siren 4900 words, 15 comments, on Jun 29 2:44 PM. In Adult, Dark, Fiction, Mild erotica, Romance• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Ghost of a Siren 5000 words, 2 comments, on Aug 21 3:08 PM. In Adult, Dark, Fiction, Mild erotica, Romance• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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‘I am doing the only right thing’ she thought as she began scribbling at the bottom of the unfinished letter. 'I have to follow my heart.'• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This is already embarrassing because it’s obvious she’s won the fight. I should know I can never win against Holly.• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I check my make up in the wide mirror, surrounded by circular lights. All my hair's been pushed to the side. There's nothing worse than a m• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It was 7 months, two weeks and 1 day since the doctor told us she had cancer. Lung cancer, to be exact.by crazybellanz 500 words, 46 comments, on Aug 22 12:05 PM. In Cancer, Death, Depression, Inspirational, Life, Love• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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And its all gone to Hell now, hasn't it? The t.v. is white noise and I can hear the sirens wailing softly in the background.• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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CallMeWhenUrRich with Promised Lies (1).
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Hi Amanda!
I'd like your critique on 'Girl Scout Nookie' and 'Women's Worth'.
Aspasia
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Endless Reign Of Darkness by Iris Doyle
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Kain, Nighthunter by Drac
Yes, I would like you to critique my story
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My screename is ZackTruel, and my two entries are "Hostage Rescue" and Knights of Honera". I would like a critique on both of them. Thanks!
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I can take any criticism you can throw at me so don't hold back
I hope you enjoy reading and i don't really need any points but i would appreciate your input
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Awesome! That is what I like to hear from entrants.
I will gladly critique your story, but I will need to know the story's name first.
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Name: LindaIsMe,
Story: Twisted Fates - Chapter One: The Beginning
Yes, I would like you to critique my story. -
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Yes I would like a critique. The story is called: Lucky O’Toole and the Stone Cold Sculptor by scifibob. Thank you. -
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kadin, the king of hearts, yes i would like you to critique my story -
klerebear - "Fade Into The Background"
Yes, I would like you to critique my story. Thanks! -
Much-dipstick, my story is Rose Thief. I would love you to critique my story so here is your 'Yes, I would like you to critique my story'. xD thank you sooooo much I hope you get some very good entries.
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I am Androgyne and the story is "Our Mother's Funeral." I would love a critique on it, but it is not necessary (I see you have a lot of entries to read, so if you can't get to mine, that is fine.) -
Crazy Mini-Van Drivers By Crowned.Clown
Yes, I would like you to critique my story, please and thank you! ^_^ -
My username is Intoxica and I'd like to enter my story "Bed of Bones" for a critique and honest feedback!
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Oh sorry, haha i just realized i entered my stories in another one of your contest! sorry!!! you can DQ mine, it was my mistake!!
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You can critique mine. Name is Jack Necron and The story is Keep on living, Jack.
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Whoa, you can remove that one. For some reason, it didn't save changes I had made, so it's only 400 words...odd.
The new one should be 530. I will re-post it.
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Yes, I would like you to critique my story Impulsive Proposal. This story has been removed. -
Gaeanewt with Apologies
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Is poetry allowed???
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Hmm, I didn't say anything about it in the rules so, sure poetry is allowed.
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Well, u do not expect me to write a 500 word poem. Or do you??? DQ me if you want to but would be glad if you don't. My poems are 'Rising from the death' and 'My House on fire' And yes i would like critique on my poems. Actually i would love some.
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You're gonna have a ball reading through over 80 entries! lmfao
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Haha I've got my work cut out for me that's for sure.
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Hey, sorry, I thought my story was over 500 words- it's 495. Is that okay? (I didn't see the word count until after I added it to the contest)
Oh, and please critique my story it's called Inevitable
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That's alright. lol I will allow a five word leeway. And yes I will critique it also.
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Story Critique please =3 My story is called What Hurts the Most
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wht great entries you have!!! WTG!!!
My name is Logan the Name of my story is "Vampire for Hire" its a screenplay for a movie i am working on, but no worries, the entry i submitted is in story fashion. This is an idea I had for a long time, its about a vampire named, Mr Grin, who is hired to find a missing girl.
NOTE: 'Yes, I would like you to critique my story'.
but if you can't no worries at all i know you are swamped in this contest, TYVM Amanda Vampiress, blessxxx -
I removed my entries from here and entered your Vampire Contest!
Sorry the inconvenience -
Eroticwolf with Erotic Vampires
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'Chosen Children' and 'A Dream that turns into a desire, a desire that turns into a dream' are the two I entered. I would appreciate if you could critique it. Sorry that I took one out, I accidently put in the wrong one, and I started panicing cause for whatever reason I couldn't get it out. xD
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Please critique my story called Julys' April.
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A walker arises and hidden confessions by dragonsdemise.
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Eddie with 'Lullabies to You'
Based loosely on Luke/Noah from ATWT (When I say 'loosely,' I mean I basically took the names, and that's it.)
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Please critique my story
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Hello Amanda
Yes, I would like you to critique my story. I appreciate you taking the time to look this over as I have respect for your high level of writing ability.
Spirit and The Last March Of Colonel Harry McCreath - by Tomereader.
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Hexen - Love you to Death
Please Critique my story
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Name: HezzJo
Story: Stolen Childhood [2nd Draft]
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Hi I'm new & would greatly appreciate your harshest criticism of my story Coming Home.
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Entered. When Man Has Fallen
RomeoRuined
When Man Has Fallen, Chapters 1-3;
1 - Remembrance
2 - The Art of War
3 - Desecration.
'Yes, I would like you to critique my story'
I know its long, but I'd like for someone to read the whole thing and give it an overall critique, rather than just piecemeal comments, here and there...
Much obliged, and will return the favor.
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My story, sunrise is a twilight fan fiction
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Fanfiction
Sound - Naruto -
Prologue and Chapter One
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You comment on all of these wow!
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Yes, I will be commenting on all of these entries. lol It will take some time, but I can do it.
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goodwriter with victim of the internet
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Yes Please!
Hey Amanda,
I would be very gratiful if you could critique my story! 'Tis called 'Grace Underwood and the Lost Sceptre of Reliana - Chapter Four'.
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The Search for Significance by Random317.
Yes, I would like you to critique my story.
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Mrs. Pefley's Last Lesson by Random317.
Yes, I would like you to critique my story.
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Yes, I would like you to critique my story.
"Melting Rainbow" by Miss Ruby
Thank you very much
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I only have part 1 is that ok? (Prewritten)
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Wow, this is a popular contest! I'm not really surprised, I might have a 'free-for-all' contest soon.
Anyone wanting to enter MY contest, here it is: http://storywrite.com/contest/12796
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