I know that all of you love your stories. Their like your babies. You watched them grow from one sentence to fifty pages (or less lol) anyways you love them so much you want to protect them from the evil people out there
well guess what? You are going to stop protecting them right now. If you are planning to get it published, you're going to have to send it out here in the hard, cruel world. I'm going to help you.
I am going to read it and critize it. Now hold on before you come after me with a shot gun. Let me explain. Editors are cold. They are heartless. They don't care if they hurt your feelings. They are just evil like that. I'm trying to help you by not getting upset and burst into tears when some fat editor says you suck.
Ok I'm sure the editor isn't going to say you suck but they might as well say it if they don't like it.
So if you are still too sensitive about your story, do me a favor and not enter. That way I don't have to yell at you when you start insulting me. It's a waste of time. Becuase I'm sure I'll sound like a witch (subsitute that w with a b
) and I won't be surprise to get an 'f you.'
but at least know I'm giving you my honest opinion.
Guidelines:
there is only one and just one: 1000 words or less.
•it can be any genre, any style, any whatever.
•write "angelic dragon, you suck" in your authors note. If I don't see it, then that means you didn't read any of this meaning you were to lazy to read and randomly entered in meaning I'm going to delete you with a smile on my face.
well guess what? You are going to stop protecting them right now. If you are planning to get it published, you're going to have to send it out here in the hard, cruel world. I'm going to help you.
I am going to read it and critize it. Now hold on before you come after me with a shot gun. Let me explain. Editors are cold. They are heartless. They don't care if they hurt your feelings. They are just evil like that. I'm trying to help you by not getting upset and burst into tears when some fat editor says you suck.
Ok I'm sure the editor isn't going to say you suck but they might as well say it if they don't like it.
So if you are still too sensitive about your story, do me a favor and not enter. That way I don't have to yell at you when you start insulting me. It's a waste of time. Becuase I'm sure I'll sound like a witch (subsitute that w with a b
) and I won't be surprise to get an 'f you.'but at least know I'm giving you my honest opinion.
Guidelines:
there is only one and just one: 1000 words or less.
•it can be any genre, any style, any whatever.
•write "angelic dragon, you suck" in your authors note. If I don't see it, then that means you didn't read any of this meaning you were to lazy to read and randomly entered in meaning I'm going to delete you with a smile on my face.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 6
- Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 25, Bronze: 15, Honorable mention: 1 people
- Final notes: Thank you everyone for entering in. I'm terribly sorry ghat I didn't get to comment on everybodies work. Life got hecktic and sadly I ran out of time. I did get to read everyones and I'm truly impressed with a bunch of them. Wait until an editor reads your stuff; you'll have them in the palm of your hand.
Contest Winners
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Scars snake down my arms, my waist, my thighs; they are shadows of the past, old friends with stories to tell.by elenii 600 words, 33 comments, on Jun 15 1:14 PM. In Dark, Depression, First person, Pain, Teen
Gold trophy winner
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I reach out and I take the gun off the living room table. I pop out the cylinder, see the bullets, pop it back in and spin. I must have dby Dark Legend 900 words, 21 comments, on Jul 14 7:08 PM. In Dark, Drama, Horror, Sad, Short story
Silver trophy winner
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Bronze trophy winner
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James learns that his wife is going to die.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Miss Recondite 500 words, 6 comments, on May 1 9:25 PM. In Adventure, Dark, Depression, Inspirational, Pain, Strange, Teen, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The echo streamed across the desert, streaming through the air, cascading into oblivion. The weary traveler, knowing no rest, struggles on.by mbuchanan 1100 words, 2 comments, on Jul 20 11:37 PM• Not viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This is for Nathan, my ex crush, who I despise right now.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I walk through the pouring rain, water flowing down my cheeks. No, it isn't the rain. Those are my tears, silently falling one after anotheby Angela Christine 1200 words, 14 comments, on Jul 16 10:01 AM. In Death, Depression, Life, Loss, Other, Pain, World war ii• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Each step she took on the sand brought her closer to her fate. She stood stationary for a moment as the waves licked her toes. The white dr• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Time rolls back and forth. Swinging and swinging. I figured it wouldn't change. Tic toc tic toc swings tha clock. I thought my life and timby LoveToWrite55555 500 words, 16 comments, on May 24 10:19 PM. In Action, Adventure, Death, Fantasy, Humor, Life, Love, Other, Pain, Romance, Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Annastones 1000 words, 4 comments, on Jun 26 12:41 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"Renjad! Get back here!" I called in exasperation, but nothing was going to stop him now.by MusicOfTheNight9 500 words, 26 comments, on Jul 9 10:26 PM. In Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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One of the gifted finds another of her kind, and finds out that there is more of a risk having a gift then she thought...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Lacy smothered her face in her pillow and closed her eyes as tight as possible. She turned over, wiped the black mascara-filled tears from• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I don't usually write about fantasy, but I just had to with all the anime pictures I've been looking at. A tad cliche but well, I'm trying.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It all started out with this girl named Tayna. She was a normal looking teenager. She was white and she wore makeup everyday,lots at that. She wore Aeropostale, American Eagle, Hollister, and Abacrobie everyday because her moby goodwriter 1000 words, 2 comments, on Jul 8 8:03 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I opened my eyes to find arms wrapped tightly around me and I gasped.
“Helix!”by Andiness 800 words, 7 comments, on Apr 10 5:28 PM. In Fiction, Horror, Life, Love, Robyn johnson, Romance, Science fiction, Shade, Vampires• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
what is means to be killed all over again.
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The abrasive Sun beat on the poor, tired Earth. So many years had gone by since the end; there was no relief. The Rivers had died out lon• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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oh my gosh. I wish I could enter my story. but it goes over the word limit by 500.
have fun with your contest though. I don't think I have any others I would want to enter.
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Hmmm what's your story? I might make an expection. I like doing those once in a while.
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In the guidelines it says to write 'angelic dragon you suck.' Look for yourself. Ooops *blushes* I didn't realise it was your contest!!! I guess you need to go beat yourself up now!
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Lol yeah I wrote that to see if anyone was paying attention to what I was saying. Lol
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My story is Bladers-Chapter one. It is the only one i'm really focused on. The other stories kind of turned into deadbeat ideas now.
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Sure go ahead and enter it in if you are seriously working on this story of yours.
I understand the deadbeat ideas. Lol I have a lot of dead bodies of ideas laying around here. I'm still burying them. But go ahead and enter it in. -
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Yeah, thanks. I'm not really into actually winning the contest much, I mean it would be nice but all I want right now is some critics on how to make it even better. Punctuation and grammar have always been a hard spot for me But still thank you so much for allowing me to enter the contest! Oh and because I read the rules, you would know because I talked about the word limit, would I really have to put the thingy in my authors notes?
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No problem. That is the main reason for this contest is to help people with my comments and critizism so they can improve and make their stories even better.
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Why don't you like Angelic Dragon?
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What someone doesn't like me???
tell me the name and I'll beat them up. Lol just kidding.
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ooooo...I love this, beat me up if you wish LOL
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All right!!! I got permission to beat you up. So exciting. Can't wait. Lol
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can it be very random?
like the topic says. mine is verry verry random. i dont get y u wanted to say u suck, in the contest -
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Yeah sure it can be as random as it can be. On the I suck comment, I'm just having fun. My friends and I joke around a lot and they always say I suck. Lol I just felt like putting that.
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if my story is 200 over, is that ok?
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Yeah sure enter it in.
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mine's a little over the word limit--is that ok?
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Yeah that's fine. Go ahead and enter it in.
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Entered. Since it just might be the only way to get you read a story of mine
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mine was a prewrite so i couldn't put in the author notes angelic dragon sucks and also why would u want people to write that about you
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Tell us what the title of it is so we don't accidently delete it out.
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