Pay It Forward - Prewrites allowed

Hello,

Since I won the previous contest - my first time winning a Gold - and one of the rules was to create a contest like that one - this being my first contest - here I am (oh an excuse my run-on sentence).

Anywayz, I'm not one to make rules- but I made them - and stuff but I will make a challenge.

I don't care if you read and comment other people's stories because I know that you may be busy. I know that I am busy and will be due to college finals ( ).

Here is my challenge:

1. I don't care what story you put into this contest.

2. I would like some help writing one of my stories. So this means that you would actually have to read the two pieces of writing that I’ve written on it. Once you do that, you will have to write the next chapter. Even though I allow any story, I will give precedence to those who write this one - but then if your writing is good and engaging, I wont discriminate.

Please note, this is my first comment

Oh yea, please don’t make them overly long

Fine fine, I will put up some rules

1. I don’t mind about the grammar, if I find it, ill just leave you suggestions for you to fix it and see if you do - you get brownie points.

2. Keep the cursing to a minimum please.

3. Don’t make it too long since i have finals coming up - but the stories have to be engaging and have to draw me it.

4. No bashing God please.

5. No gay stories please - I not particular to those...

6. I hope you have fun

So without further ado, have fun
Oh before I forget, the story that I would like your help on is: Solomon Prologue and the First chapter. Please read…and comment.

New Edit: You can enter more than one story BUT, they can't be of the same option. And please be honest, ill ask people if I have to.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 21, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 300, Bronze: 300, Honorable mention: 20 people
  • Final notes:
    Hello.

    This was a pretty difficult contest to judge. I actually enjoyed them all . Now all the stories can be improved and no I wasn't looking for perfection because I myself can't write perfectly. Yet I urge you to keep writing you all won at least an honorable mention and as you can see, only 3 of you could win the top 3. If you have any questions, let me know.

    Thanks

Contest Winners

  1. Dark Fury
    Phillip said to his brother, "I saw her again last night in my dream." Phillip was a big young man with sandy hair and blue smiling eyes.
    by Andy Stephenson 2200 words, 375 comments, on Dec 30 4:40 PM 2005. In Dragon, Fantasy, Fiction, Love, Medieval, Romance, Vore
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 51654, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. A Simple Story
    A Simple Story / / “Life is a miracle in itself” / / A perfect life is only some one could hope for in today’s world people have it in th
    by Mohd 1900 words, 9 comments, on May 15 5:59 PM 2007. In Depression, Inspirational, Life, Love, Romance, Short story, Spiritua
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 80051, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. I was not crazy
    Mom why do we have to go to the haunted house I hate throws things"Said amber standing In line to go to the old house that once was the ally second home."Scared out of her mind she was. / Because dear your father and I
    by jtnbuck 800 words, 10 comments, on Apr 18 9:41 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. War in a Kiss
    When light and dark combat in a single kiss who will win out?
    by EtherealButterfly 1000 words, 59 comments, on Mar 22 10:04 AM 2007. In Dark
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. She Stood In a Shadowed Doorway
    / SHE STOOD IN A SHADOWED DOORWAY / / by Robert Davidson. / / She stood in a shadowed doorway for a few moments before stepp
    by robert davidson 1000 words, 48 comments, on Apr 28 4:45 AM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Life
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. Error: Unable to find finalist item 66017, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  9. Endless Nights
    The rain beat down softly upon her as she walked slowly down the sidewalk. She wasn't sure where she was going, but she had to go. Her tear
    by Kaori 500 words, 15 comments, on Apr 27 1:09 AM 2007. In
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. I never liked him, did I?
    by stephaniemeyerfan 1900 words, 2 comments, on May 17 10:07 PM 2007. In 200-1500 lines, Drama, Inspirational, Life, Love, Other, Young adult
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  11. Still You’re Not Alone
    / “We are gathered here today to remember the life of and grieve the loss of Mr. James Hartsel.” The preacher’s words grimly struck the heart of young Kat. It still wasn’t quite real to her, watching the closed coffin that inevitably held her best frie
    by The White Rabbit 1800 words, 3 comments, on May 13 8:19 PM 2007. In Death, Love, Short story
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. Beneath the Storm
    / -1- / I went to my office in the Ocean Works facility. I noticed I had an E- / mail. I opened it and it said there was a scooter race at 3:00 this / afternoon. / I loved the scooter races and decided I’d go to this o
    by Alex13810 3600 words, 3 comments, on May 18 7:11 PM 2007
    Honorable mention
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • EtherealButterfly
    May 5, 2007
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    CONGRATS ON GETTING GOLD!!! I got silver! You should enter mine, or have you already?


    • Sith Lord Alvarez
      May 5, 2007
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      yup yup, thnx i think i entered your contest so lets see how it goes and y dont you enter mine, if you havent already...hmmm maybe you have

  • Sith Lord Alvarez
    May 18, 2007
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    ok guys, the contest is nearly over. it wont take me long to read them all, but commenting will be another matter...


  • ArdLiath
    May 21, 2007
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    Hey, thanks for the HM


  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    May 21, 2007
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    Thank you

    Thanks so very much for the gold trophy and all the points. I greatly appreciate them. I am surprised, although very pleased. I thought from your comment my story would not place. I am honored that it did. Thanks for hosting this contest. I hope that you had a very good time with it.

    Andy

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