Sadness and Depression poems/short stories

Ok I really would like some origional sadness, something that could bring me to tears or throw me into a deep depression, It can either be a poem or a short story. No Erotica Im only 15 so just dont even think about it. Its ok to have errors in grammer and spelling as long as its readable. Um thats all i can think of so PLEASE ENTER



Rules
1: Must be either a poem or a short story
2: Agian NO EROTICA
3: EVerything else goes

Goodluck to all who enter and thank you

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 22
  • Rewards: Gold: 200, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    Such a wonderful contest thank you for all who entered and congradulations to the winners

Contest Winners

  1. "Alright guys, Joe and I are going to Saturday Night Bowling. Matthew, Alex, and Timmy, watch Halie.. Halie be good for your brothers." mommy said.1
    by HalieGirl401 2200 words, 6 comments, on Jul 17 7:28 PM. In Depression, Divorce, Hate, Life, Scared
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 250074, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. I reach out and I take the gun off the living room table. I pop out the cylinder, see the bullets, pop it back in and spin. I must have d
    by Dark Legend 900 words, 21 comments, on Jul 14 7:08 PM. In Dark, Drama, Horror, Sad, Short story
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Once, long ago or in the far future (it doesn't matter which), the
    earth was covered in cities.
    by Minorchar 800 words, 8 comments, on Oct 25 9:34 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. Why did I do it? I ask myself that question everyday. I'm not a bad person, I never meant for this to happen, but it did, and it happened f
    by Elect The Dead 1000 words, 17 comments, on Feb 22 1:34 AM. In Bullying
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. It was incredible, simply incredible.
    by Nora McLevison 400 words, 4 comments, on Jul 1 12:19 AM. In Dark, First person, Musings
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. by Lekos Memory 100 words, 56 comments, on Jun 19 11:44 PM. In Dark, Inspirational, Life, Young adult
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. by Alexgia 900 words, 20 comments, on Feb 17 8:43 PM. In Dark, Depression, Fiction
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. she was a tiny little thing, barely bigger than the length of your finger nail. 1 / Her eyes were wide, luminous, expression swam in the pool of color that she called burgandy. Her hair was longe
    by imagist 600 words, 13 comments, on Jul 16 6:08 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. Every day, my heart was broken,1
    by Elphinstone 200 words, 3 comments, on Jul 13 4:28 AM. In Dark, First person, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • Oh! I've got JUST the piece for this in my notebook! Bookmarking!

  • Hmmm...I don't think I have anything at the moment that you might have read. Hmmm...


  • Lekos Memory
    July 14
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    Oops lol, eyeoftheblizzard is my bf's page and I was helping fix things up for him and I forgot that it wasn't my account. Lol so yeah thought I would clear that confusion up for you.


  • J.P.Troy silver member
    July 14
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    hi
    how many entries are we each allowed?