30 Lines or less

Okay, so I have a few points to give out and I thought I'd start my first contest with a game my friends and I like to play called "30 Lines or less". So this is what I want you to do. Write me a story using no more than 30 lines (poems do not count). It can be on anything... as long as it does not go over 30 lines.

There is only one golden rule: Do not go over 30 lines. Other than that have fun.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on July 21
  • Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 50, Bronze: 25, Honorable mention: 3 people
  • Final notes:
    Well, my first contest has come to an end. I didn't expect to get so many entries. Thanks you guys for entering and congrads to the winners.

Contest Winners

  1. A story in thirty lines or less for a contest.
    by Dark Legend 200 words, 161 comments, on Jul 13 1:36 PM. In Fantasy, Fiction, Short story
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. "What was her name?"
    Allen looked up, startled. "Elizabeth."
    by Sabrina Emily 300 words, 2 comments, on Jul 14 4:09 AM
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. by Emm-Emu 300 words, 5 comments, on Jul 18 10:38 PM. In Short stories
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. There are exaclt 30 sentences, (at least that's what my computer is telling me), but I seperated them in paragraphs. Enjoy!!!
    by Cerise Dragon 600 words, 14 comments, on Jul 13 2:36 AM. In Halloween, Holiday, Humor, Short, Teens
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. "What are you doing?"1
    by Sha Wujing 200 words, 3 comments, on Jul 8 8:25 PM
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  6. She visits me again, and when I’m with her I feel at peace. I no longer hear the bleeping of my heart monitor or the dripping of my intravenous food bag even the smells and sounds of the hospital disappear. There is only ligh
    by emmataylor 300 words, 3 comments, on Jul 17 12:39 PM
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. A life's overview in 30 lines or less
    by SabrinaStarr 500 words, 3 comments, on Jul 13 8:54 AM. In Contest entry, Life
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  8. by Kagamine Rin 300 words, 9 comments, on Jul 13 9:19 PM. In Hope, Pain, Romance, Strange
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. I run from the raging sky.
    by elenii 100 words, 10 comments, on Jun 25 12:57 AM. In Contest, Guilt, Sentences
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [22]

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  • by Asfand 100 words, 27 comments, on Jul 2 6:07 AM. In Crime, Dark, Depression
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The first we talked to each other I knew we would always be friends. Our friendship has kept on growing and I'll be here for you to the end of time. You listen when I have a problem and help me dry the tears from my face.You
    by Ncis152 400 words, 1 comment, on Jul 11 10:43 AM
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by MsAlee 200 words, 17 comments, on Sep 3 5:08 PM 2008. In Unedited, Young adult
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • I know we haven't talked in awhile, but I have a feeling you would understand this more than anyone. 1
    by BloodRedPrimrose 100 words, 1 comment, on Jul 12 4:13 PM
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • he thinks he loves her, but she can't love him until her walls are down
    by Elphinstone 100 words, 3 comments, on Mar 16 1:37 PM
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • by tonyher 300 words, 1 comment, on Jul 13 6:03 AM. In Adult
    • Commented on by judge.
  • How about a guillotine? Imagine a beautiful, sunny day with the perfect temperature. The ocean is glistening in the background. All would be well, if this day wasn’t your last. Due to a misjudgment your life will be cut, lit
    by emptycassettecase 300 words, 1 comment, on Jul 13 2:17 PM. In Dark, Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • That Girl in the Mirror. 1
    by Everpurple 200 words, 5 comments, on Jul 7 5:46 PM. In First person
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Hera glared into my eyes forcefully, the gun pressed against the back of her own skull. I called to her, but she seemed to far away.There had to be a way to tell her Jonathan's death had been an accident, and that her boyfrie
    by mememe6 100 words, 7 comments, on May 19 2:30 PM. In Contest, Death, Suicide, Suspense, Teen
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • The cold gnaws at my skin like a wolf to its prey. The air is thick and chills my nostrils; my eyes stay shut and cannot see. My teeth remain clenched and cannot talk; my fingers lay swollen and cannot feel. I hear a crack th
    by kierancluchey 100 words, 5 comments, on Jun 13 9:54 PM. In Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • Heart thumping. The lights come on, bright and squealing like daylight to a drunkard, like stage beams to a ballet dancer. 1
    by hungerartist16 100 words, 4 comments, on Jul 16 2:02 AM. In Fiction, First person, Inspirational, Life, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The young man proudly opened his closet. In it, prominently displayed, was a military uniform on which his collection hung. Tugging lightly
    by Gary Alexander 200 words, 30 comments, on Jul 3 12:17 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
  • When I was in junior high, I used to attend a Catholic School and the most of the teachers were nuns. There was some civilian teachers but
    by whoudini 400 words, 8 comments, on Jul 6 11:01 AM
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite

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  • Lekos Memory
    July 12
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    What!? No poems? Darn...

  • Wait, is the limit 30 or 12? i am confused. the last line says: It can be on anything... as long as it does not go over 12 lines.


  • Asfand
    July 12
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    12 lines or 30 lines???


  • DoozerDan silver member
    July 12
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    Be that lines, or paragraphs? Jest wonderin' because line lengths can change depending on monitor width, font size, etc. So one person might fit 50 words in a line, another might fit 10. And that 50 words might be half a line on someone's big computer screen, or 40 words on someone's small screen.

    Just wondering.

    [edit] Though I suppose that it doesn't matter too much as it's 'or less'. But I like to point these things out.

    • Queenie-Chan
      July 13
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      30 lines, not paragraphs and no prob on pointin it out. when my friends first told me about it i didn't really understand.


  • So Strange Greeters member
    July 13
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    Seems easy and fun enough. I will write my story tomorrow and enter it into this, for sure.

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