Contest Concept Short Story by otnemem

ok, by a concept story i mean a story that doesnt rest on characters or action, simply concept, whether it be the premise of the story (character wakes up in a room having no idea how he got there) or the twist in the end, where the last line realization will have me austounded.
if youre unclear about what i mean, which ill understand, search for the film "cube" on imdb.com or read, "i have no mouth and i must scream" by harlan ellison, and youll see my point.

no word limit but i imagine most entries will be short and sharp

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 25, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 25, Bronze: 14, Honorable mention: 1 people
  • Final notes:
    ok thanks for all the entries, wow this was hard!
  • To judge this contest, you need to have at least as many finalists as you have rewards. You have 4 awards but only 3 finalists.

Contest Winners

  1. It began as a small bump on a small twig of a limb. A minute bump on a large silver maple tree, it had no self awareness.
    by Andy Stephenson 500 words, 39 comments, on Mar 26 3:00 AM 2007. In Childrens, Inspirational
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. Scenes from a future plagued by an addictive game...
    by Xineph 800 words, 17 comments, on Jan 7 9:12 AM 2007. In Dark, Fiction, Science fiction, Short story, Strange
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. When light and dark combat in a single kiss who will win out?
    by EtherealButterfly 1000 words, 59 comments, on Mar 22 10:04 AM 2007. In Dark
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • Delfishie
    May 3, 2007
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    hey!

    "I have no mouth and i must scream" inspired one of MY contests, too!

    Dang, is there NOTHING that story can't do? *grins*

    I'll submit something for this, but I'm not sure if I completely understand your rules. After all, Cube and IHNMBIMS both had well-defined characters and plot in it (both - to survive).

    Do you mean to have a really mind-blowing setting?


  • Xineph
    May 4, 2007
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    My Concept?

    A game destroys the world.


  • HeartSxAnDxStripeS
    May 6, 2007
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    Not sure

    I'm not sure about this, but I'll enter my story anyway. Hope it's at least close to what you want.


  • otnemem
    May 9, 2007
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    yeh i knew people would find it hard to understand what i was asking of them but hopefully what you enter will fit the bill and IHNMBIMS is such a great story!


  • Token Massacre silver member
    May 25, 2007
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    congrats to the winners


  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    May 25, 2007
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    Thanks, Otnemem

    Thank you again for the trophy and points. Gold in this contest! I was very surprised. When you commented on it, the story I felt was not quite what you were wanting. I hope you had a great time with this contest and thanks again for the gold trophy and points! I really appreciate them.

    Andy

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