Hatred and Revenge

I want the following emotions-in one STORY.

Hatred
Anger
Grief(only a little)
Spite
Malice

And the following things too

Revenge
Irony
A beautiful/handsome woman/man
Power
Dreams
Ambitions(Big ones)
Pain(both physical and mental)
Descent into madness
Rise to sucess

You have to use at least 2 emotions and 3 of the plot prompts(including the compulsory ones).

Give them all, no matter how cliched, depressing or dark they are.

Rules

i)Stories with a beginning, middle and end.
ii)I prefer long stories, not some random thing you wrote. The more complex it is, the more I will enjoy it. If your story fails to impress me just from the start, I'm not going to continue to the end.
iii)Use of humor is not allowed.Give me the darkest tales you can imagine.


The central theme must be Hatred and Revenge

Best of luck. The Gold Winner will recieve a special prize other than the 100 points-the silver and bronze winners will get only trophies, not the points. Only Goldie gets to enjoy here.

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on September 11
• Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 50, Bronze: 25, Honorable mention: 1 people
• Final notes:
  Sorry for judging so late! All the entries were wonderful, but in the end, 4 entries managed to make away with the trophies. Hope to see you all in my next contest!

Contest Winners

1. Lost

   by lavanya 2400 words, 23 comments, on Oct 3 8:56 AM 2008. In Contest entry, Dark, First person, Ghost, Murder
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. The Calligrapher

   by Asfand 4400 words, 33 comments, on Jun 18 12:44 AM. In Crime, Dark, Fiction
   Silver trophy winner

   • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. The Doll's Revenge

   James Wallace sat in his house with his bottle of whisky in his hand. He was alone. His daughter, Becky, had died several days earlier and had been buried. His wife, Margaret, had left him after the funeral.1

   by peggi 1800 words, 11 comments, on Jan 18 7:44 PM 2008. In Horror
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
4. The Blue Lantern

   Living in the world all alone, forced to think hell is a place called home, nothing else to do but pack, leaving and never coming back.
   
   

   by Rose Hathaway 400 words, 11 comments, on Jun 5 11:29 PM
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [10]

• Good Mourning

  The day started out like any other, the morning all the same. I recall the traces of sunlight crept through my dusty blinds to cast a warm

  by r4gg3tyM4n 600 words, 11 comments, on Jul 1 11:39 AM. In Disturbing, Firstperson, Horror, Macabre, Surreal, Weird

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Kenneth Brown.

  Mel Kline squat uncomfortably in a the bush just off the Dans Bridge. He was watching a man who sat on the bridge dangling his feet over th

  by cole3313 400 words, 10 comments, on Aug 19 2:22 PM 2008. In Contest, Fiction, Murder

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Spirit Heart: Rise of the Fallen Chapter 13

  The dark wizard Anra reflects on his sad past, then slays an entire village of Helians in a dark and bloody battle.

  by Arcos 1600 words, 2 comments, on Oct 16 8:52 PM 2008. In Adventure, Fantasy, Fiction

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• Let Him Burn

  The devil spoke to me, then, telling me I had returned his favor.

  by VioletConcept 500 words, 26 comments, on Jun 20 10:55 PM. In Fire, Pain, Strange

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• A Masterpiece Of Revenge

  I realize this might not be 'long', but too bad. If this doesn't count as something that you wanted, just DQ me.

  by Storms 200 words, 5 comments, on Jun 30 12:10 AM

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• The Bastard

  There he was, the Bastard. The sick little fucker that had been following me around since I moved to this neighborhood, introducing me to t

  by JoelMonroe 400 words, 5 comments, on Nov 4 12:41 PM. In Horror, Strange, Zombie

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite

Comments

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  ForThePlague
  July 1
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  Hm...very interesting...I'll see if I can do this.
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  lavanya
  July 1
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  Hi!

  well , like always i am puting my AN here and letting u know that i used emotions'Anger and Grief' and 'Revange and pain' as stroy plot in my story 'Lost'. But if you find any problem in story ..can DQ after all you are Judge...
  I am free member and cannot edit my story so i m leaving this message ...
  Lavanaya.
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    sberendt
    July 1
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    I'm sure you can still edit your story, even as a free member. I mean, I still could before I upgraded my membership. This is a writing site after all, it wouldn't not let you edit your work! That's a major step to becoming a better writer!
    
    On the page of your story, the "link" that says 'edit' should be at the right and up near the top. Hope this helps!
    
  • • lavanya
      July 1
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      Thanks for help dar but i was telling that i cannot edit my AN because it would ruin my font and setting because now i m free member..but thanks for your help
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  Asfand
  July 6
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  My story 'the Calligrapher' - I used Revenge, Spite, Malice - well actually nearly everything! But you can DQ if you think there's something missing. I THINK everything is there, one way or the other. By the way, my computer is not letting me edit anyting, prolly the connection is slow - so I just thought I'd put it in here likle lavanya!