Hey Everyone,
My last contest that I did this way was really popular, so I'll do it once again.
1) Enter two of your stories, anything goes except errotica, or same sex romance.
2) I don't want to read anything "R" rated, but anything PG-13 or less is okay.
3) Put your username in your notes.
I don't care how long it is, but if it's over 1500 words I probably won't read it all, unless it's really good. Anything can enter though...even novels. Just because I don't read every word, doesn't mean it won't place. It really depends on how many entries I've got. No matter what though, I will give you encouragement, and constructive critisism ---EVERY STORY HAS ROOM FOR IMPROOVEMENT!!!
Oh yeah, one last thing...I encourage everyone to read and comment on at least three other stories. They can be other entries, or stories I've written. Please mention things you like, and at least one thing that can be improoved on. Before trophies are assigned I will query the placers on what they commented on so I can double check.
If you are going to comment on one of mine, please comment on either, Night Trial, or Forced Perspective. Those are stories I'm preparing for submission. Don't just give me good comments because I'm the judge though
I promise it won't affect my decision in the least.
Good luck!
My last contest that I did this way was really popular, so I'll do it once again.
1) Enter two of your stories, anything goes except errotica, or same sex romance.
2) I don't want to read anything "R" rated, but anything PG-13 or less is okay.
3) Put your username in your notes.
I don't care how long it is, but if it's over 1500 words I probably won't read it all, unless it's really good. Anything can enter though...even novels. Just because I don't read every word, doesn't mean it won't place. It really depends on how many entries I've got. No matter what though, I will give you encouragement, and constructive critisism ---EVERY STORY HAS ROOM FOR IMPROOVEMENT!!!

Oh yeah, one last thing...I encourage everyone to read and comment on at least three other stories. They can be other entries, or stories I've written. Please mention things you like, and at least one thing that can be improoved on. Before trophies are assigned I will query the placers on what they commented on so I can double check.
If you are going to comment on one of mine, please comment on either, Night Trial, or Forced Perspective. Those are stories I'm preparing for submission. Don't just give me good comments because I'm the judge though
I promise it won't affect my decision in the least.Good luck!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 3
- Rewards: Gold: 100, Silver: 50, Bronze: 20, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: Thank you, everyone for entering! There were some awesome stories and it was very stiff competition. Everyone please keep writing!
Contest Winners
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I'll always remember the feeling I had entering Blackeyed Petes Pool and Arcade Emporium that day. It was surreal, like following the whit• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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by gezza 900 words, 81 comments, on Aug 13 1:47 AM 2008. In Angels, Fantasy, Young adult
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Their faces were no longer the faces of beautiful statues. They had changed. They were the faces of demons, the faces of hell...the faces oby Ghost of a Siren 3800 words, 58 comments, on Oct 29 3:40 PM 2008. In Fantasy, Fiction, Horror
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His eyes were trained to notice the slightest peculiar mark left on nature's ardent setting.by ZackTruel 900 words, 13 comments, on Aug 28 3:22 PM 2007. In Adventure, Fiction, Inspirational, Other, Short story, Third pe
Honorable mention
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"Hell found me." 1
by colinlinder 1600 words, 11 comments, on Jun 27 3:17 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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When your best friend tells you that your boyfrind just went suicide, it's not a pleasant feeling. Within your mind, the memories fill, andby Angela Christine 3800 words, 10 comments, on Jun 22 3:48 PM. In Life in general, Love, Pain, Struggle• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Take a tour in the horror house and learn the secrets that happened in it. ONLY IF YOU DARE!by Lekos Memory 200 words, 32 comments, on Mar 31 10:52 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Norea 600 words, 5 comments, on Nov 17 2:25 PM 2005. In <200 lines, Depression, Other, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Renée's life was perfect, until she learns that she is really a vampire.by bethann93 1500 words, 16 comments, on Jul 5 4:45 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by bethann93 100 words, 4 comments, on Jun 29 3:03 PM. In Contest, Depression, Inspired by music, Love, Personal, Sad, Short story, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Juniper Cran 900 words, 8 comments, on Apr 13 1:21 PM. In Crazy, Dark, First person, Horror, Life, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Some people say that the town I live in, Ages Death, is haunted. However, I just can't come to believe it. Yeah, sure, strange things haveby Marisalyn13 1500 words, 38 comments, on Jun 24 7:45 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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We the Shadow Beasts usually lay dormant in the darkness of the forests, unless we are awoken by a disturbance...1
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I entered two, one relatively short and one long one. I do feel the longer one is the better of the two works. Thanks
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Poems ok too?
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yep, bring it!
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thx jennywinnie. i'll take ur advise in2 consideration.
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Of course I'll give it a chance! I give them all a chance! And trust me, this isn't personal at all, it's just all about getting feedback so that we can improove our stuff. Feedback, positive or negative is the best thing for all of us as writers. In fact, when someone tells me I'm doing something wrong I improove much more than if someone just says...good job, loved it!
I just recently threw my work up in front of some published writers and got the smack down. But I was happy about it, because now I'm looking at my stuff in a totally new angle, and my stories will have a much better chance of getting accpeted when I submit them.
I beleive everyone who wants to observe the world around them, and put those observations down whether in Fiction or Nonfiction is awesome! We are all at different levels, and so I hope no one thinks when I give long cretiques that I didn't like the story. Alot of times when I take the time to give a long cretique, or point something out it means, I really liked it.
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lol. i didnt misunderstand. i started 2 write that comment cuz u said under 1500 words or something, and u said u might not read it all if it was longer. thats what i was talking about, but then i saw u commented it already, so i was going to erase that comment. lol. but thx. not many ppl care about reading stories just cuz there long, so i always ask them 2 giv it a chance. but thx 4 the advice and 4 reading it. i appreciate it!
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why does no one allow same sex romance???
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cool. thanks for the trophy!
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Wow, thank you ever so much for the gold! I know there was some stiff competition in this contest too. That's great!
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