For this contest I want you to enter your MOST DISTURBING story you've written.
Your story must follow into a category of:
Horror
Science Fiction
Thriller/Suspense
Mystery
Also you Must Be 15 years old or OLDER!!!
(If you are younger than 15, you will be DQ'ed)
I would really like to read something disturbing, oh, and erotica is fine.
Rules:
No Gay/Lesbian
No Romance!!!!!!
No Chat Talk
No Bashing Religion
No VAMPIRES !!!!!!
No WEREWOLVES !!!
No Fanfiction
You Must Be 15 or Older!
Genres I would like to see:
Serial Killer
Ghost/Demons
Monsters (No Vampires or Werewolves)
Satanic/Religious Cult
Make sure your story is readable and has good spelling.
If you have any questions fell free to contact me by IM or email.
Your story must follow into a category of:
Horror
Science Fiction
Thriller/Suspense
Mystery
Also you Must Be 15 years old or OLDER!!!
(If you are younger than 15, you will be DQ'ed)
I would really like to read something disturbing, oh, and erotica is fine.
Rules:
No Gay/Lesbian
No Romance!!!!!!
No Chat Talk
No Bashing Religion
No VAMPIRES !!!!!!
No WEREWOLVES !!!
No Fanfiction
You Must Be 15 or Older!
Genres I would like to see:
Serial Killer
Ghost/Demons
Monsters (No Vampires or Werewolves)
Satanic/Religious Cult
Make sure your story is readable and has good spelling.
If you have any questions fell free to contact me by IM or email.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on August 12
- Rewards: Gold: 150, Silver: 100, Bronze: 75, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: I would like to thank all of you for entering. I've read some pretty good and disturbing stories.
Winners:
1st: Strange Love, by tallblondie
2nd: Statistics, by WritersEffigy
3rd: The Divine Truth, by Eyes Pried Open
4th: Girl Scout Nookie, by Aspasia77
5th: Kinky and Dangerous, by IntrepidFantasy
6th: Madness Pandora, by Jack Necron
7th: Caring for a suffering soul,by angellove
8th: The Final Note, by Lady Pixie
9th: The Good Samaritan, by Canada07
10th: Mirror, Mirror, on the wall, by G. Alexander
11th: Creaking, by Rune Morose
Good job to the winners, and good luck to all in your future endeavors.
~ MetalheadX
Contest Winners
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A man who always fought the urge gives into it.by WritersEffigy 2200 words, 123 comments, on Jun 5 4:54 AM 2008. In Crime, Dark, Death, Fiction, First person, Horror, Short story
Silver trophy winner
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by IntrepidFantasy 900 words, 26 comments, on Feb 29 12:37 AM 2008. In Adult, Crime, Dark, Death, First person, Horror, Sex, Strange
Honorable mention
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For the past three weeks, I have lived the life of a serial killer and felt the madness that filled his world. I usually do not wait so lonby angellove 3000 words, 31 comments, on Jan 28 2:51 PM 2007. In Fiction, First person, Horror, Love, Religious, Supernatural Honorable mention
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by Lady Pixie 600 words, 7 comments, on Feb 20 5:39 PM. In Adult, Contest, Dark, Death, Fiction, First person, Horror, Murder, Short story Honorable mention
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In the darkest area of the darkest alley it's almost midnight, a man is suspended in the air by two silver hooks• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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“Lawrence Malson can’t be no one-woman man, baby.” / Larry was rather surprised to hear that old cocky remark of his on the wind again, spoken through the devilish tongue of which he hadn’t made use since college. Theby Rune Morose 6600 words, 15 comments, on Jun 8 11:42 AM 2007. In Crime, Dark, Death, Fiction, Horror, Murder, Other, Pain, Short story, Tragedy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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My name is Dylan Duiz. I would like to say that I have lived my 16 years of life as a normal boy, but sadly, I have not.• Commented on by judge.
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I didnt feel 'normal' from the moment I woke this morning, I instantly felt an undeniable sense of unease and axiety in the air. I knew somby desercration 1600 words, 5 comments, on Jun 30 6:17 PM. In Dark, Insanity, Medical illness, Psychotic, Psycological, Surreal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I called McGinnis at around noon on a Tuesday. “Hey, McGinnis it’s Carter.” I said when he answered. “Yea, well you never call just to say hi, so what is it?” “You still got your 30-caliber?” He swiveled around on his desk cby Surfingfarmhand 4400 words, 1 comment, on Jun 23 9:05 PM. In Boom! headshot!, First person, Murder, Unedited, War• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The day started out like any other, the morning all the same. I recall the traces of sunlight crept through my dusty blinds to cast a warmby r4gg3tyM4n 600 words, 11 comments, on Jul 1 11:39 AM. In Disturbing, Firstperson, Horror, Macabre, Surreal, Weird• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Impenetrable scarlet stretched before me, a seemingly endless plain of crimson. I could see nothing, just a mesmerizing blood-kissed aura. It smelled of decaying flesh, though nothing could be seen. A chain was caught across• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by SabrinaStarr 2400 words, 2 comments, on Jul 4 5:05 AM. In Adult, Cannibalism, Death, Dolcett, Erotica, Horror, Vore• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by SilentMoonDance 2400 words, 54 comments, on Apr 1 12:13 PM. In Fiction, Ghosts, Romance, Sad, Short story• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The tale of Edward Mordrake, the unusual young man with a strange growth plaguing the back of his head.by the back row 2000 words, 7 comments, on Jun 30 12:37 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It painted my hands, Mummy. It was everywhere, dripping down and pooling on the ground, rivers of life from my hand – sweet and warm.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A girl has been lost for several years, living on the streets, knowing only one person• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by lenore2010 2200 words, 10 comments, on Dec 13 1:48 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I looked into the cars mirror, watching his wife cuddled up on the back seat. The new born baby cooing softly, her little hands clenched i• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Shuda 1700 words, 1 comment, on May 20 5:02 PM. In Adult, Fiction, First person, Humor, Life, Young adult• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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“My God.” The professor placed three of his thin fingers on the glass. “How long has she been like this?”1
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The heavy set man entered the room, carrying a bloody cleaver in his left hand. The fresh blood dripped from the cleaver slowly,by mbuchanan 800 words, 8 comments, on Jul 20 12:14 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Frenchy Chapeaux sat on the pile of pelts and waited for the tremors to subside. Even in the brisk pre dawn breeze, sweat stung his eyes.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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MERCHANTS DOOM PART11 / This treatise is or, maybe my only worthwhile legacy. Oh! I have riches and moneys, properties and business interesby Tomereader 3900 words, 18 comments, on Jun 18 2:07 PM 2008. In Adventure, Dark, Fantasy, First person, Horror, Strange• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Hey...
Mine's thriller/suspense.
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I'd love to enter "Satan's Fathers" but it's nowhere near completion and I don't want to miss another contest of yours...lol. I'll just enter my serial killer one instead. It's called the "Dollface Killers" and both of my female killers are lesbians. Can I please enter this one? You'll love it, I promise!
*puppy eyes*
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I could extend the contest so you can finish it, and maybe make 2 entries per person. I would really like to read both.
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I don't get it, no romance, but erotica's allowed,
no religion bashing but you really want to see a Satanic/Religious Cult?
And what, kids can't be disturbing too? perhaps i'll be back!
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Well, erotica is very different than romance. erotica is acting out the romance. And if notice in horror movies there are a lot of sex, but there is no romance.
And religion bashing is when the story says 'god is not real' or something. A satanic/religious cult won't bash their own religion. In fact, a cult story would be the opposite of religion bashing.
I look forward to your entry.
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mine is about a nutjob.
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Ok, I apologize profusely for not entering this contest! I'm *such* a bitch sometimes...forgive me
. Maybe I can enter Satan's Fathers later next week (summer school gobbles up all my time) but I just finished a cannibal story that's REALLY disturbing and something you might like. All it needs is a little editing before submission.
EPO
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No need to apologize, I understand, school is known to put a young writer on a writers block. I look forward to reading Satan's Fathers or the cannibal story (They both sound good to me.)
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I wonder if my character fits in here....she's just a little bit crazy...enough to commit murder.
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I changed the name "Satan's Fathers" to "The Divine Truth" because that title fits my story better.
The first part is complete, and I would like to enter it in your contest but I'm not sure if you'd rather read the cannibal one instead...
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i sorta entered a vampire story but its not really about vampires
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Hi!
Thanks for the honorable mention and points. I appreciate them. I'm very pleased you like 'Girl Scout Nookie'.
Thanks for hosting.
Aspasia
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