Welcome to my 5th contest on StoryWrite, well I think its my 5th, not quite sure. 
I want your absolute BEST story possible. The one story out of all that YOU think should win! It doesn't matter how many medals it has won, or hasn't won, all that matters is that you think it should win!
Rules:
1) 200-2,000 words please, I do have a life 
2) No erotica
3) Keep swearing to a tasteful minimum
4) ABSOLUTELY NO FAN-FIC OF ANY SORT! I WANT THIS TO BE ORIGINAL! Automatic DQ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Brownie Points:
Fantasy
Sci-fi
Comedy
If you kept me interested the whole story, then automatic finalist 
NEW STORIES are more likely to win!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Points may/may not go up 
Erin, signing off 
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 10
- Rewards: Gold: 111, Silver: 50, Bronze: 25, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Thanks you all fro entering, I had a ton of awesome entries! I had a hard time picking out the winners. wish could award more then 8 trophies, but I cant
Congrats to the winners
~erin
Contest Winners
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I stood at the edge of the shore line allowing the ebb and flow of the ocean to gently brush against my toes before receding. A gust of winby amanda vampiress 1800 words, 55 comments, on May 24 7:22 PM. In Dragon, Fantasy, Paranormal, Short story
Bronze trophy winner
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by xFree2Partii51 900 words, 2 comments, on Jul 1 1:49 PM. In Childrens, Fiction, Life, Love, Other, Romance, Teen, Young adult
Honorable mention
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Anna says Christmas music brings out your Christmas spirit. Does that mean I will never have a Christmas spirit?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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She lays in the box, broken and bleeding. She can feel them staring down at her, uncaring of her suffering. She can hear the scratching of their pens flying across clipboards, taking notes; she can hear their hard, mercilessby LiveLoveJabberwocky 1300 words, 6 comments, on Apr 29 1:07 PM. In Dark, Depression, Fantasy, Fiction, Horror, Pain
Honorable mention
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by Neolittlefish 200 words, 14 comments, on Sep 30 2:31 PM 2008. In Inspirational, Love, Poem, Sad, Society
Honorable mention
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A man who always fought the urge gives into it.by WritersEffigy 2200 words, 126 comments, on Jun 5 4:54 AM 2008. In Crime, Dark, Death, Fiction, First person, Horror, Short story• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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very interesting!about a psychology experiment. read please!by osmsk21 2300 words, 12 comments, on May 25 9:20 PM. In Dark, Drama, Fiction, Horror, Psychology, Sad, Short story, Society, Third person• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [46]
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She’s the most gorgeous thing I’ve ever seen, one ton of curves and edges glistening after her bath. I can’t help but slide my hand across• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by EverRose 100 words, 35 comments, on Jun 1 11:32 PM. In Dark, Depression, Hmm, Life, Poetry, Romance, Strange, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by kelseyo 800 words, 14 comments, on Nov 17 7:23 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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"If you don't open the *bunny*ing door, I'll skin you and make you a chair!" He yelled at me.by Dual.Of.Fireflies 2000 words, 25 comments, on Jun 19 8:41 PM. In Depression, First person, Inspirational, Life, Teen• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A mysterious story about a girl named Rachel who's fiance was murdered on the beach while they were asleep.by flowerbee1234 2800 words, 20 comments, on Apr 25 11:48 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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humanity is gone. civility is gone. society is in shambles. and my father is dead....by alwaysrockon 500 words, 42 comments, on Jun 14 6:04 PM. In Dark, Depression, First person, Hmm, Horror, Sad, Society, Spiritual• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Silver eyes. Eyes that were full of thirst, maliciousness, and obsession. Eyes fixated on me.1by xXDaring2DreamXx 500 words, 3 comments, on Apr 29 8:28 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by musical tai 400 words, 7 comments, on Jun 13 9:38 PM. In Depression, Fiction, First person, Life, Pain, Sad, Short story, Teen, Young adult• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A tale of a fairy bullied by elves and his one wish.by tonialoise 1100 words, 78 comments, on Dec 18 9:45 AM 2008. In Children's, Elf, Elves, Fairies, Fairy, Fantasy• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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"The clock winked. There's no other way to put it, but it's true, I saw it! You think I'm crazy but-. There it goes again!"1
by CinnaAgent11 400 words, 11 comments, on Jun 17 3:33 PM. In Humor• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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We were asked to write a composition entitled "A Day On The Beach" for english. My teacher looked at me pretty strangely after she read thi• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Your First Heartbreak1
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When your best friend tells you that your boyfrind just went suicide, it's not a pleasant feeling. Within your mind, the memories fill, andby Angela Christine 3800 words, 10 comments, on Jun 22 3:48 PM. In Life in general, Love, Pain, Struggle• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Not as cliched as it sounds. Well, maybe at first, but it is really going to be a good story.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The moon shadows me, following me everywhere I go.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Renée's life was perfect, until she learns that she is really a vampire.by bethann93 1500 words, 16 comments, on Jul 5 4:45 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It all began, with just a game.......1 / Prolog Tang Che woods, Japan, 19932 / The mud and leaves crunched under his feet. Above him the• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Clary--Selene--Tayy 600 words, 81 comments, on Jun 19 11:15 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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There is never enough time, is there?
by welshsparky77 900 words, 15 comments, on Dec 22 7:38 PM 2008. In Angst, Family, First person, Life, Personal, Sad, Short story• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A voice speaks to my body, but the soul-man has come. He had come for my soul. Because there is no escape from The Restraint.by Sammiannnz 200 words, 8 comments, on Jun 27 2:35 AM. In Dark, Death, Depression, First person, Hmm, Murder, Other, Pain, Unedited• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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A BRIEF EXISTANCE - AGAIN1 / Words have power. Whoever said: / ‘Sticks and stones may break my bones, / but words will never hurt me,’ wasby Tomereader 700 words, 18 comments, on Jun 20 12:39 PM 2008. In Death, Fantasy, First person, Life, Short story• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A day at the beach.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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If you're reading this, congratulations, you are one of the lucky (unlucky?) few who survived. And if you're reading this, I did not.
by colinlinder 700 words, 8 comments, on Jun 20 11:05 AM. In Science fiction• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She felt Aiden's fur tickle her ear, and she slowly turned so she could hear his whisper. "You don't have to do this Enchanted.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A Prologue, in which the story begins.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I woke in a sweat. The teddy bear fell atop me from the shelf above. It was quiet, too quiet. The water splashed against the ship’s hull, the porthole dark. The luminous dial read three past four. I waited. It was as if I hadby SandhyaSuri 700 words, 5 comments, on Jan 10 8:33 AM. In Adventure, Fiction, First person, Life, Military, Water• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by XxMiraMoonbladexX 400 words, 11 comments, on May 17 8:01 PM. In Dark, Depression, Fantasy, Love, Romance, Young adult• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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It was still but at the same time I saw it rippling wildly before my eyes.by wierdlikthat 300 words, 3 comments, on Jun 27 12:08 AM. In Dream, Fantasy, Fiction, Life, Short story• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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i know a story but i wrote it yesterday its new and its good. i want others to read it too cause its mostly about what i want in this world and i love i put my heart and soul in this story but the most part is that its a story about someone else. someone who i loved but that is gone and left never heard from again
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Ok. Look forward to reading it
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You ask for the best but you limit us to 2000 words.
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Yeah, a little bit over is fine, but I don't have that much time on my hands to read a whole novel
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So I entered a story, but I might replace it with a new story if I get the time. I'm mainly focusing on getting Below the Surface typed right now so I don't know if I will. We'll see though.
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Awesoem
Thanks 4 entering. cya soon
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Are poems allowed?
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eh, sure what the hell. go ahead
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lol thanks
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I see contests now and again that ask for "your very best" and then give brownie points to new writes. That's kind of contradictory, in my mind. An older story has been read a lot, had suggestions made, and got edited to be better than it used to be. Unless we're plopping a story in here that we edited somewhere else, I don't see that it could be better than a polished and edited prewrite. My $0.02.
That said, I'm entering anyway.
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Thank you for your .02$, its greatly appreciated
I guess you are right in one way, a pre-write would be more perfected, but still I would rather have someone write a new new story, even if its not perfect, a few grammatical errors never hurt anybody. That I know of at least. Maybe there is a grammar freak who commited suicide because his/her writting wasn't perfect, but I highly doubt that...
Also, why couldn't you write a new story thats your best? Its like saying you have already reached your full potential, so why other trying harder to be better?
Thats my 0.02$ so together we have 0.04$, not that there much you can do with .04$ anyway
Anyway, anyhow, it doesn't matter what it is, pre-write or new, so long as YOU think its your best writting that you could possibly do.
Look forward to reading your entry
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may i enter a poem?
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Yeah, go ahead
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thank you!
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how do you feel about chapters? or excerpts? because my best story is 7000 words. would you like my second best?
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CHapters would be fine, just so long as its the first chapter
Second best would be fine 
look forwad to reading it
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ok mine is a prewrite im not sure if its long enough. i wrote it during science class. lol. its suppossed to be a short story
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oops, i read the word limit wrong and entered my story, which is like over 3000 words, feel free to DQ me...
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My story
listen, i know my stories longer than required, but i noticed that after i entered it. lol, im stupid, i know. but even if im DQ'd or not a finalist or watever, can u give it a chance and read it all? u dont hav 2, but im just asking. it'd b awsome if u did. thx!
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ok, could you tell me which one is yours?
thanks
~DBC
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i failed...
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how did you fail?
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