Show me what you're made of...in one paragraph

Hello my SW chums this is my third contest so far and I must say, this contest thing is starting to grow on me . What I want is one paragraph stories--not two, not three, just ONE paragraph entries that can be about ANYTHING your heart desires. However, in saying that, I don't want stories about flying donkeys or aliens square dancing it has to be *meaningful*. If you want a clearer picture as to what I'm looking for, here's the link for some particularly amazing pieces by my favorite author: Ralph Robert Moore...

http://www.ralphrobertmoore.com/tinyeyebrows.html
http://www.ralphrobertmoore.com/tinybirds.html
http://www.ralphrobertmoore.com/tinygirlfriend.html

Yup, it's that time again for RULES!!!

1. 200 word limit
2. Erotica is welcome, even encouraged
3. Give me something WORTH reading
4. Poetic language, vivid imagery, and disturbing content will all win you BIG brownie points
5. No fanfiction allowed
6. Would prefer no vampires or fairy tale creatures because I really hate them
7. Terrible spelling/grammatical errors will cost you
8. Tell me your favorite farm animal in the A/N
9. That's it, have fun and gimme lots of dazzling entries!!!

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on June 17
• Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 3 people
• Final notes:
  Hello everyone! I apologize for the late judging...my bipolar meds kind of screwed around with my thought process so I didn't have the desire to do anything for the past few weeks. I'm better now, though You all had such powerful, unique entries and I applaud you all for entering! This contest was extremely hard to judge. Advice for next time: READ THE RULES!!! More than a couple of you forgot to include your favorite farm animal in the Author's Notes.
  *Waggles finger* Until next time ^^.

Contest Winners

1. Fresh Meat

   The natives brought the recent catch into the village squealing in a language that only it knew. Tying it to a large tree by its feet its

   by Andy Stephenson 100 words, 56 comments, on Jul 23 6:46 PM 2007. In Dark, Fiction
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. Murderer under Shroud

   by Reaver 200 words, 20 comments, on Nov 28 3:17 PM 2008. In Adult, Crime, Death, Murder
   Silver trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
3. Home Early - Contest

   by Mag the Chodja 200 words, 6 comments, on Jun 11 7:29 PM. In Adult, Blah
   Bronze trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
4. This is Love -- Contest

   Romance description written for a contest.

   by Mag the Chodja 200 words, 11 comments, on Jun 11 7:43 PM. In Life, Love, Romance, Stuff
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
5. Promise

   Far along the avenue where the horizon cuts the clear sky from the dusty neon and the peopled, traffiked street, shimmers a blue and distin

   by Gary Alexander 100 words, 28 comments, on Jul 2 11:45 PM 2008
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
6. A Little Piece of Colorado

   Deep between the troughs of the mountains, where time fades by like water through my fingers, the majestic scenery envelopes the mind in a

   by amanda vampiress 200 words, 15 comments, on May 21 4:36 AM. In Fantasy, Life, Poetry
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
7. Priceless

   by FallenShade 100 words, 3 comments, on Jun 12 6:55 AM. In Contest

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [16]

• You Might Think We're Together But I'm Not All There

  by lenore2010 <100 words, 6 comments, on Feb 2 5:43 PM

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Murder of the Fishes

  He killed them all. Their carcasses of needle-thin bones and opaque eyeballs and stray metallic scales haunt the gravel covered bottom, a reminder of his hedonistic heroism. Triumphantly, he darts through the greek pillar rui

  by AuthenticReality 100 words, 3 comments, on Jun 11 11:31 PM. In Life

  • Commented on by judge.
• Way to Die

  by kiwirhage 100 words, 4 comments, on Jun 12 2:01 AM. In Adult, Crime, Dark, Death, Fantasy, Horror, Pain, Sex

  • Commented on by judge.
• Exception drabble

  I stared at it unbelieving. The light from it blinded me in the dark room. I wanted to put my fist through it but knew the glass and then

  by tonialoise 100 words, 7 comments, on Nov 11 11:48 PM 2008. In Babble, Contest

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Torn apart

  by musical tai 100 words, 7 comments, on Jun 17 12:49 PM. In Contest, Dark, Depression, Drama, First person, Life, Sad, Tragedy, Young adult

  • Commented on by judge.
• Curiosity

  ten sentence story.

  by tonialoise 100 words, 26 comments, on May 13 10:44 AM. In Childrens, Drabble, Fiction

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Fire

  She was fire, beautiful, lustful and exotic. Sitting in a corner I would admire her beauty, never daring to touch her, as I knew I would on

  by Shah Z 100 words, 4 comments, on Jan 19 1:26 PM

  • Commented on by judge. Prewrite
• Memories of my home.

  by Blackonyxfire 200 words, 2 comments, on Jun 12 6:29 AM

  • Commented on by judge.

Comments

• By me, right now

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• 
  Aspasia77
  June 12
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  Sorry.

  I ain't got one for this on this account. I'll try to send you a couple from my other account.
  
  Aspasia
• 
  Andy Stephenson
  June 17
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  Hi!

  Thanks so very much for the gold trophy and all the points. I appreciate them. I'm greatly pleased you like my story so well. It's a fun little paragraph.
  
  Thanks for hosting.
  
  Andy