Scary Story Writing Tips

Would you like to write a scary story?
Here are some tips!

Scary Tips :  

You are the builder of the story, so have a plan.

1.Beginning

A. Catch reader's attention
B. Begin the conflict

2. Middle

A. Describe the events
B. Build the tension, suspense, and action

a. Put scary ideas in reader's head
b. Use dialogue - Character's talking

c. Be descriptive - See below

3. End

A. Resolve the suspense
B. Whatever happens at the end is the result of the events in the middle.

a. Sometimes it answers or resolves the tension, sometimes it leaves the reader with a pounding heart.
 

Additional hints for good writing:

1. Show, Don't Tell.

Tell
 Show
 
He was sloppy.
He dragged his sleeve through the spaghetti sauce.
 
She was glad to see me.
 When she saw me, she ran, arms open, to give me a wonderful bear-hug hello.
 
I was clumsy.
 I stumbled into the hall.
 
John had a cold.
 John coughed until his ribs ached. He wiped his sore, scabbed nose for what seemed the millionth time as he reached for another cough drop.
 


2. Description - Use the five senses. Before you write, add some scary words to this list.

See - Use color - red, blue; bright

Touch - hard, cold, wet, rough

Smell - Cinnamon, rose, musky, rank

Sound - crunch, snap, whistle

Taste - bitter, sweet, sour

3. Verbs are important. They actually help set the tone and are quite descriptive in a short story

Example: Bland - Jane said. More descriptive - Jane screamed.

4. Put ideas in reader's head - foreshadow.

Tips from :

http://www.bremen.lib.in.us/scarytips.htm

Read best selling scary stories to help inspire you.

The month of October will be here before you know it, so study up now and have the best scary story ever to share with us during that month!

 

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  • Hawkeyes
    October 9, 2008
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    good

    This is very informative for me to do some horror and I may look back at this for refernce.
    Thanks for this information.


  • Peppermint star xxx
    August 2, 2008
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    thanks! this really will help with a new story i'm writing =]


  • Rune Morose
    August 2, 2008
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    Great tips for novices, I suppose.

    Here's an interesting and very informative look at three different essential elements of horror:

    http://www.everything2.com/index.pl?node_id=1690589

  • Hawkeyes
    August 1, 2008
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    very good

    Alot of information given here and I would have to relook at this again because I want to review it over ansd over again. This is pretty much the same thing as of writing anything I mean any kind of stories. Thanks for the tips and I will try to keep in mind of the column.


    • Kari gold member
      August 3, 2008
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      Hawkeyes, I am really glad that this helped you


  • B Chandler Greeters member
    August 1, 2008
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    Writing a 'scary story' is quite fun to do actually but I do agree that anyone who is considering doing one might want to take about a month or so ahead of time to do their research on what they're looking for and want in their story


  • Shinami Tsuyoki
    August 1, 2008
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    These are actually very imnformative. It reminds me to look over my murder stories a few hundred times before publishing here. *laughs* Those are all true points though, especially about the blandness of "Said". Honestly, far too many people use that word.

    Then again, these tips could actually just apply to all writing in general. But thanks for posting this! (This comment is long to get me points! And this explination which is rather unnessicary is for me to assure those points! Huzzah!)


    • Kari gold member
      August 3, 2008
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      Well, you don't get points on columns I believe. Sorry . I'll forward you a few over just because


  • Elisabeth gold member
    August 1, 2008
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    Hmm, food for thought

  • condor
    August 1, 2008
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    Very informative information which i shall indeed keep in my. Thanks for the tips.


  • Ghost of a Siren
    August 1, 2008
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    Great job, very informative!


  • trekkergirl
    August 1, 2008
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    Thanks this was a interesting read and should be a big help. trekkergirl


  • trollstorm
    July 31, 2008
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    Good tips!

    I agree with August-Lilly these tips can help in any genre. Thanks


  • Slash-Hydosho
    July 31, 2008
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    Hrm... That'll help...

    A few things I've been thinking on writing have a horror background, and this might be the edge I need in writing it... Thanks so much for the helpful info!


    • Kari gold member
      July 31, 2008
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      No problem! Glad it helped you!


  • SageSyren Greeters member
    July 30, 2008
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    Good column Kari. I think I can use this for this recent story I've been working on. Thanks
    Brooke


  • Be.Your.Own.Hero
    July 30, 2008
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    Coool! Hey, this can help for even non-scary stories. Great job Kari!


    • Kari gold member
      July 30, 2008
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      Wonderful point! Glad you like the column. I was inspired when I read it

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