How To Create A Unique Fantasy Character?

In this column you will learn;

Understanding the principles of character.
How to avoid clichés?
How to give characters life?


Characters are indeed one of the most important elements of story writing. In fantasy, characters need intense concentration. The chemistry of characters has to be good; it has to be intriguing and attention-keeping. The problem is the most noticeable part of a story is also a character – hence we need to avoid clichés since people notice them immediately.

Old writers, having experience are generally better equipped at character-sketching. Young writers, in an attempt to make all characters ‘cool’ leave out necessary flaws and characteristics. Story writing is different than movies – remember that.

The importance of characters is that they carry on the story forward.



Important Traits Of Every Character


Personality – they have to be unique and intriguing. We need to empathize with them, feel for them.

Action – this is how they will effect their surroundings.

Reactions – this is how the surrounding will effect them.



Avoiding Clichéd Characters


Often I find myself asking: Why is the hero always orphaned and slow? Why is the princess always distressful, her motive of being kept in the story just to be rescued or captured? Why is the bearded old man, who knows everything, not open his darn mouth?

People are sick of old characters appearing in stories over and over again. The best thing; bring mixtures. Just keep one of two of clichéd characters and now introduce it to a new group.

Some characters to avoid:

- the orphaned hero.
- the hero related to royalty but has no idea how to use a fork.
- the damsel in distress
- the happy-go-lucky young kid with dark past.
- the anti-social ‘cool guy’
- the amnesiac (especially if it’s a wizard or mage)
- the dwarf in the company for comical purpose
- the stupid and slow but kind-hearted hero
- the half-elf
- the unattainable girl the hero gets at the end.



Bring A Twist To Characters


Yes, you need to twist and turn the normal cliché to become a good sketcher. We need to add fun people, which clash in personality and give that desperately needed captivation to your story.

Twisted characters – a sure hit:

- the flawed hero (big feet, freckles, brawny etc – no more strikingly good-looking people)
- the princess with an attitude problem (what you looking at, weirdo!)
- the daydreamer (these are hilarious )
- the egotistical (I’m better than everyone)
- the suck-up. (Let me go and I’ll kiss that pretty face )
- the strong woman that kicks butts.
- the traitor (I was on your side all along - NOT)
- the fatty fat-butt.
- the nerd (Yes, did you see the gotamal jamaki plant on the way!)



Bring Characters To Life



Bringing a character to life is very important. Just look, would you care about what happened to the Wizarding World if it wasn’t for Harry Potter stuck in there, or little Dobby? Why would we listen to a hundred orcs and humans battle – if not were the miserable hobbits caught between?

No, not by card-board cutouts – by exaggeration. Yes, you heard me, exaggeration is the key to bringing a character to life.


EXAGGERATE – just let it go. If your hero is dumb, make him 2+2 = 22. If you’re character is egotistical, make it really egotistical (Can I hear a Draco Malfoy )

REALISTIC RE/ACTION – this is the lock of the key. You see, the way your character reacts has to be really realistic. I would not jump out on a boat to sail the world! No one would.

This is the clash, personality must be exaggerated and interesting. The re/actions must be realistic. For example:

My hero is really stupid and thinks he’s a peacock, but when it comes to leaving his town for killing the Dark Lord on some prophecy, he would simply say “What the hell?

Having said that: keep in mind the realistic re/actions are in context with the personality. For example: A greedy person when presented with the possibility would outright risk his life for a hoarde of treasure!



Thanks everyone. I hope this helps!



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  • Shadowed Phoenix silver member
    September 23
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    This is just what I was looking for! Now maybe I'll have more luck creating my charactors. Thanks for writing such an awsome collum.


  • Kirin
    September 17
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    Wow! Very helpful... Thanks a lot!!

  • This is awesome. It reminded me what to use and what not to use. Some of the things I'm using is actually on her. The girl who kicks ass and isn't only a sidekick. (main character) and the biggest twist of all, which I can't say lol. Thanks for putting this up.

  • That is very good.

    You gave great suggestions, many of which I try to use in my own writing actually. It's nice to see that somebody out there sees a lot of these people as being stereotypical. This collumn is incredibly helpful to both old and new writers. Whatever it is you're doing to do this, keep it up. It's working.


    • Asfand
      May 17
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      Just trying to lend a bit of help! I researched a hell lot for tips and things for my own novel to work on. Thought why not combine them and share them here!

  • I had characters all along!

    Except, my hero is an immature little curious boy. Cliche x 1,000,000.

    And also, I like to add quirks and habits - it really makes the character spring into reality. I mean, no one is just an emotionless suit with no quirks! So why can't characters have them?!


    • Asfand
      May 17
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      I like quirks!!! Yep, they really rbing a chracter to life...i mean we all DO have habits eh!

  • Cool!

    awesome!! this is kewl. i am happy u rote this.

  • Wonderful!

    Great job, I hope to create a unique character (hopefully I already have, seeing as I've written a few things. lol.) Anyways, I really enjoyed this, very good.


  • Aaez
    May 16
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    Oh aren't you an insufferable know-it-all!

    Nice helpful stuff though. I just wish you hadn't written it. =P

  • dreamshell
    May 15
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    A lot of the characters you give as "twist" examples are themselves becoming old hat. Also, you paradoxically tell writers to both exaggerate their characters and make them realistic. Which is it?

    This is a personal opinion, but I also don't think the Harry Potter books are great examples of "unique fantasy characters".

    --dreamshell--

    • slashinguk
      May 16
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      I suggest exaggerating motives and personality, but then taking realistic (plausible and consistent) actions.

      Someone could be amazingly greedy and selfish, and so would consistently choose the corresponding action, possibly even at risk of life and limb; whereas it would be unrealistic to have the same character turn down a money-making opportunity for reasons of conscience.


      • Asfand
        May 16
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        Ah, excellent point -- I just editted becuase of your reply. I forgot to add, the realistic re/actions have to be in context with the exaggerated personality at all costs. Never contradict the personality!

        Thanks!


    • Asfand
      May 16
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      I just said Draco Malfoy to get a little laugh!

      That might be a little true, but these are also the characters nobody tires of hearing about. They're interesting and fun to read - they, to use the write word = sell!

      And NO, if you read carefully you will see the personality has to be exaggerated while the actions and reactions of the chracter must be realistis!

      Forexample: Your hero is a spoiled brat that never listens to anyone (exaggerated persona) but if a wizard tells him to sail to Gagaland to kill the Dark Evil-Lord - he won't do it. (realistic re/action)

      I hope that clears some stuff!

  • "the hero related to royalty but has no idea how to use a fork"
    This made me laugh. I have a character who finds himself out to be a prince, but he's also a criminal as well.

    "the amnesiac (especially if it's a wizard or mage)"
    I have a guy who PRETENDS to have amnesia... and then starts to learn a bit of magic.

    "the strong woman that kicks butts"
    Yes. I've got one-and-a-half of these, heh.

    "the traitor (I was on your side all along - NOT)"
    I have a reverse traitor... Neither he nor the amnesia-faker above suspects that they happen to be on opposing sides... Even though, if they had any idea, they'd drop the fight because those two are that close of friends.

    And, just wondering, what do you think of sticking these characters together? How do you think it would work out?


    • Asfand
      May 16
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      I like your chracters cept the first - the whole thing about the hero getting related to royatly, heir to the throne or the son of the Dark Evil-guy is very old now.

      I love the reverse traitor great idea!

      • That's okay--ever since I first saw that it was a cliche, I got to thinking and realized that I could use one of my other... interesting systems of reality to put him into the throne without any blood relation. It actually makes more sense this way than with him being the born prince. So, thanks. I honestly did learn a lot from this, you know.


  • Shikasgirl
    May 15
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    Wow, this is really really good!!! I love character, they are the basis of everything, and the hardest to make in a book to. I really loved this colmn!!!!

  • I love this! Great column.

  • sweet! I'm writing a novella using the world of the D&D RPG, with a drow and elf mix (drow and any other elves==mortal enemies). Now she's suicidal/homocidal. heheh.

    Thanks for the great advice!!!

    Kali


  • Tiger-Lily gold member
    May 14
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    Importantlly Obvous!

    Wowowow! This is great! This will help so many people (even if they don't write fantasy).

    Just a little thingie, though:

    "REALISTIC RE/ACTION – this is the lock of the key."

    Don'tcha mean "the key to the lock"? To imply the "central most important method of finding the treasure of good character development?

    Thanks for the great column.

    Um...can't applaud this (no option), so... will have to suffice.

    HT


    • Asfand
      May 15
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      smarty pants. well, you're right, it is the lock of the key.

      haha, lolx, thanks HT!


  • Oddities
    May 14
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    of course

    if your using the generic sword and sorcery faux-medieval setting, your backing yourself into a corner from the start.


  • Asfand
    May 14
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    LOL. Just thought i would revise since this was on feature and all. Grammatical errors and all!

    The half-elf is very cliched. Uh, you heard one of those RPG based fantasies, the half-elf is glorious there. It's very common for people to use the half-elf, torn between his half parentage and disliked by other elves or humans!

  • I approve this column. *gives you an official IrishYndina stamp of approval*

    Seriously, good points. This is very much appreciated and well-done.


    • Asfand
      May 14
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      I ave the IrishYndina stamp! My day-long goal is complete!

  • The daydreamer and the nerd...

    *check*

    This is pretty good, though I must say that the half-elf is somewhat underappreciated

    And yeah, I used to try to make my characters 'cool' ... then that story ended up sucking


    • Asfand
      May 14
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      Hm, in fantasy novels, possibly, but it crops up very often in RPG based books, the sulking half-elf torn between his parentage! Ya know!

      Yea I know what you mean, the same thing happened to me!!

  • This is soooooooooooooooo helpful with my writing thanks

  • Amen


  • SageSyren Greeters member
    May 13
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    Can always use help. Thanks for this


  • Asfand
    May 13
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    I know what you mean! We all aim for perfection in every chracter but that's the exact opposite of what we should do, i spent the last weeks reading and reading and reseraching so I came up with this not only to help other but me too!

  • Good points... very useful to writers old and new alike. I like a lot of the points you made. Very useful column.

  • some good points there.


  • Hekate gold member
    May 12
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    This is really great info!

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