Author23

Some very long words to describe me:

Timeless --- Stylish --- Sophisticated
Overpowering --- Intimidating --- Dominant
Perfectionist --- Controlling --- Competent.

I may be ten, but I like coffee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YUM!!

Coffee... *drools*

Stories I'm focused on

  • Death Journey
    She left. To die. In the rain. Alone.1 / Florence was bleeding; tragically, she staggered, clutching her stomach tightly.2 / It was pouring outside, the rain hitting
    400 words, 4 comments, February 5. In Child, Journey, Light

My Stories

  • Haunted Flats.
    "Mrs. Kritoff, you have be charged for ignoring the constant recommendations to make the subject, Kritoff Flats, safer." The court judge said, rustling a wad of paper.1 / "David, please persuade
    300 words, 2 comments, February 9
  • Esuna
    1 / Ella was walking down the street, staring at the mahogany trees surrounding the twisting path. She had just finished school, and was lugging her pink and yellow ‘Winnie the Pooh’ backpack. Sh
    300 words, 1 comment, February 8
  • File 1 of Murder Mysteries
    Volume one of the Murder Mysteries trilogy1 / Murder Mystery File One2 / The car horns were honking as the body on the ground lay there motionless. It was a girl tha
    300 words, 1 comment, February 8. In Crime, Ghost, Longbridge, Murder, Mystery, Victoria

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  • author23 : child abuse on February 9
    My name is Sarah
    I am but three,
    My eyes are swollen
    I cannot see,
    I must be stupid
    I must be bad,
    What else could have made
    My daddy so mad?
    I wish I were better
    I wish I weren't ugly,
    Then maybe my mommy
    Would still want to hug me.
    I can't speak at all
    I can't do a wrong
    Or else I'm locked up
    All the day long
    When I awake
    I'm all alone
    The house is dark
    My folks aren't home.
    When my mommy does come
    I'll try and be nice,
    So maybe I'll get
    Just one whipping tonight
    Don't make a sound!
    I just heard a car
    My daddy is back
    From Charlie's Bar.
    I hear him curse
    My name he calls
    I press myself
    Against the wall.
    I try and hide
    From his evil eyes
    I'm so afraid now
    I'm starting to cry.
    He finds me weeping
    He shouts ugly words,
    He says its my fault
    That he suffers at work.
    He slaps me and hits me
    And yells at me more,
    I finally get free
    And I run for the door.
    He's already locked it
    And I start to bawl,
    He takes me and throws me
    Against the hard wall.
    I fall to the floor
    With my bones nearly broken,
    And my daddy continues
    With more bad words spoken.
    "I'm sorry!" I scream
    But its now much too late
    His face has been twisted
    Into unimaginable hate.
    The hurt and the pain
    Again and again
    Oh please God, have mercy!
    Oh please let it end!
    And he finally stops
    And heads for the door,
    While I lay there motionless
    Sprawled on the floor.
    My name is Sarah
    And I am but three,
    Tonight my daddy
    Murdered me.

    We need to stop child abuse!
    Help Support This and Put This in Your Profile
    (P.S. I did not write the poem myself, I just saw it in another profile stating to post it in my own profile if I am against child abuse. I am extremely against child abuse, and I think this is a powerful poem against it. Just wanted to say that so I don't take credit for a poem that isn't mine, no matter how good it is. I've gotten a few comments that have made me wonder whether or not people think it is mine, so ya.)
  • SageSyren : Welcome to SW on February 5
    Hi Author23,

    My Username is -Syren- and everyone on the site simply calls me Brooke. I would like to welcome you to the StoryWrite web site. Our site is a community of people who all share a common desire to write, in some form or another, and to hopefully become a published author sometime in the future.

    You may notice a gold medal by your name. This is a free trial membership. This shows you what options you have if you were a paid member of Storywrite.com. After three days the membership expires and you become a regular member.

    I would also like to take this time to let you know about the new members group on the site. This group was set-up to show you how to post your work onto the site and to give you an understanding of how the reading/reviewing of your work actually happens on the site. If you have not already done so, I would suggest you take a peek into this group and see how this process works. 1. http://storywrite.com/group/info/New+members+group

    Along with a new members group we have a New Members Contest. http://storywrite.com/contest/3710

    It is recommended that all new members to the site give serious consideration to joining a writing group as a method of assisting them in becoming an active member of the site. It is a place to make new friends and get helpful critiques.

    I have include below a few quick tips that have proven to be very helpful to new members in doing some of the basic functions necessary to get yourself set-up and running on the site. There are some very helpful and entertaining columns on the home page.

    One in particular is fun things to do around Storywrite http://storywrite.com/column/show/161

    To find all the emoticons http://storywrite.com/column/show/53

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    On the right hand side of the page is where you’ll find all you need to edit yours stories, change your user info, change your picture, etc. Thank you for joining the StoryWrite web community. Keep penning.

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