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Hello I'm Elizabeth. I'm a female.I love to read and I love to play football with my three brothers.(No sisters)

My favorite bands are:

MCR (my chemical romance)
Metalica
Deep Purple
Perfect Circle
Flyleaf
Led Zeppelin
Three Days Grace
Linkin Park
Trapt
Kiss (Who doesn't like them?)
Coldplay
And many more. I just can't think of them right now.

My favorite Tv shows:

Innuyasha
Naruto
Family Guy
Robot Chicken
Gene Simmonds Family Jewels
Futurama
Bleach
Aqua Team Hunger Force
Many more!

My Favorite color would have to be:
Either a Dark Green or Lime Green

My Favorite Animal:
Black Panthers. Because they are so dangerously cute!

My hobbies are:
Collecting minerals (Rocks), Reading, & Drawing

Anyway, here's a poem that you need to read.





My name is Sarah
I am but three,
My eyes are swollen
I cannot see,
I must be stupid
I must be bad
What else could have made
My Daddy so mad?
I wish I were better
I wish I wern't ugly,
Then maybe my mommy
Would still want to hug me.
I can't speak at all
I can't do a wrong
Or else I'm locked up
All the day long
When I awake
I'm all alone
The house is dark
My folks aren't home.
When my mommy does come
I'll try to be nice,
So maybe I will get
One whipping tonight
Don't make a sound!
I heard a car,
My daddy is back
From Cahrlie's Bar.
I hear him curse
My name he calls
I press myself
Against the wall.
I try to hide
From his evil eyes
I'm so afraid now
I'm starting to cry.
He finds me weeping
He shouts ugly words
He says it's my fault
That he suffer at work.
He slaps me and hits me
And yells at me more,
I finally get free
And run for the door.
He's already locked it
And I start to bawl,
He takes me and throws me
Against the hard wall.
I fall to the floor
With my bones nearly broken,
My daddy continues
With more bad words spoken.
"I'm Sorry!"I scream
But its much to late
His face has been twisted
Into unimaginable hate.
The hurt and the pain
Again and Again
Oh please God, have mercy!
Oh please let it end!
He finally stops
And heads for the door,
While I lay motionless
Sprawled on the floor.
My name is Sarah
I am but three,
Tonight my daddy
Murdered me.

Help stop child abuse! And put this on your page.

  • Last seen on Nov 17 4:18 PM 2008. Member since June 20, 2008.
  • I am a 18 year old girl from Texas (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm I'm reading.
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  • SageSyren : Welcome to SW on June 20, 2008
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