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Hi, I'm Tobermory (yes, like the one from the wombles, I just liked the name)

I'm in year 12 and am trying hard to balance writing and schoolwork. This year I intend to write a lot more than last year, try to improve before the creative writing section of the HSC.

I would love to meet you so please leave comments, especially creative criticism. You don't have to be horribly nice when you review my work but don't just comment to tear it down.

The purpose of joining storywrite for me was to improve and that can only happen if people tell me truthfully what I have done right and what I have done wrong. I'm not going to throw a hissy fit if you say something negative, in fact I'll probably thank you for it.


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  • Salem Onyx Yokohama : thnx on September 10
    thnx for the info on my story...you're so right^^. Yeah about the japanese names see at the time it was going to be a japanese book so i was just to lazy to change the names,plus i couldn't find any good russian names on the internet XD.

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