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My name is Serene, but I go by my middle name Ember. This is a basic information format for me:

Name: Serene Ember (last name N/A)

Age: 13

Birthday: September 3rd

Height: 5'0 3/4

Weight: 128lbs

Hair color: Dark brown with natural
blonde, black, and red streaks

Eye color: Dark Chocolate brown with a caramelish-Gold tint

Fave Quotes:

"Is Insane Person too up front, would you prefer Corrupted american?" ~ME!!!

"Why do we kill, people, who kill people, to show people, that killing people, is wrong?" ~Myspace bumper sticker

Element: If I had an element, it would be earth. I am a very outgoing and sarcastic person. I am also a nature lover and an animal lover. So yeah that would be my element.
My other element could be fire. I have a temper and can be very moody. If you spark my temper I tend to say stuff I don't mean.

Weaknesses: I have a very irrational fear of spiders and needles, so I hate getting shots and spiders. I'm not as strong as most, and get hurt easily. I'm also klutzy as heck. I also Have a big mouth and tend to say stuff I don't mean when I mad. If I don't have my glasses on I can't see worth a crap, so that's another weakness.

Strengths: I'm not a toothpick like most girls. I make A's n' B's in school. I'm Smart, for the most part (English, Art, and Math major). I can draw "Almost professionally" as my family puts it, and They also say I can write dang good stories. I have a sense of humor. I'm tender-hearted and I can be very understanding, trustworthy, and I can make people feel better.

Favorite Genre(s): Fantasy, Paranormal, Romance, Fan-fic. I'm into the whole damsel in destress type of stories. I like the paranormal damsel in destress stories as well. I like the Forbidden Love stories and Romance Novels. As long as it is that I like it. But then comes my standards...

Hey, I'm not very picky... Okay yes I am... I'm very picky, and I am posting my guidelines on good stories. These will tell you if you are wondering whether I will like your stories. If you have taken the time to read this much, please read the rest. These are my guidelines, most have a different set. You don't have to agree, because I don't agree with most others...

This will either get a flame or no comment from me:

1.) Most know what Mary-sues and Gary-sues are right? Well if not they are characters that are perfect, and have no flaws, they are the best thing out there. I hate characters like this. No I don't mind main characters with powers that everything revolves around, but there are limits. I write stories like that with the powers and whatnot, but my characters are NOT perfect nor do I try to make them so. Give your characters and OC's (Original Characters) flaws. Not everyone in life is perfect, nor should characters in stories be. Anime or not, Fan-fic or not, no one is perfect.

2.) Incorrect grammar, Incorrect punctuation or no puctuation, or the wrong usage of words. This tics me off because it stops making sense when it's constant. Occasional mistakes are always alright, but try not to make a habit of it. If there are constant mistakes, most will get the immpression they probably aren't "accidents".

3.) Rushing, I can't say anything on this really. I have a bad habit of doing this aswell. Rushing is most people's pet-peives, I don't mind, but then that's where their age is taken into concideration.

4.) Non-sensicall plots of stories, short stories, novels, and books. This, in my oppinion, deserves a flame! I don't mind if it doesn't make sense at first and then becomes clear later on. If this is the case warn your readers about this. If it just doesn't make sense AT ALL, then it deserves a flame. Unless it's supposed to be random and/or unless it's not supposed to make sense, then it should make sense.

My Pet-peives:

1.) When people don't take your age into concideration. I know most hate it when you get a flame or criticized harshly, and they don't pay attention AT ALL to the age. It makes me angry when they don't even pay attention at all to how old you are and then go and give you a flame not even taking your age into concideration. If you do this your one to be giving out flames buddy!

2.) When someone clearly just says you did very good on your peice when it could use work. Be honest people, that doesn't mean just flame it up and down, unless it clearly sucks!!! Be critical but try to help with advise!!! Man, when people do this, it ticks me off. Oh and another thing, don't put something just because you think they want to hear it!!! Again be honest people! I also hate this because if you read over it and catch the mistakes, it makes you feel like they just put what they think you want to hear, and didn't care one way or the other.

3.) When they don't read all of it. This also goes along with number two, because most, if they don't read it they put something like: "Good job!" or "I loved it!". Don't put these unless you really mean them!!!

Most of my other pet-peives have already been mentioned earlier on. Now you know what my standards are for stories. Take these into concideration if you want me to judge a story. Thank you, Ember...

Oh I'm into warriors, so here's my clan:

TwilightClan:

leader- Twilightstar: black tom with blue eyes
deputy- Shadowfire: white she-cat with silver spots
Medicine cat- Lilygray: a light ginger she-cat
apprentice, Linheart
Warriors-
Ashflame: a flaming red tom with amber eyes
Sparkflower: a white she-cat with brown paws
apprentice, Tawnypaw
Nightpelt: a black tom with white paws
Blackbrooke: a grey she-cat with a silver tail
apprentice, Dawnpaw
Blakeclaw: a pale tabby tom
Streamfur: a silver tom with blue eyes
Windwing: a snowy white tom
apprentice, Tallowpaw
Darkenfur: a black she-cat with blue eyes, Twilightstar's twin
apprentice, Ashenpaw
Apprentices-
Linpaw: a light brown she-cat
Tawnypaw: a tawny colored she-cat (this is me)
Dawnpaw: a ginger tom with blue eyes
Tallowpaw: a silver tom with a blck tail
Ashenpaw: a light grey she-cat with amber eyes
Queens:
Lilygrass: a pale tabby she cat, mother of Nightpaw's kits
Roseberry: a golden brown she-cat, mother of Tawnypaw and Streamfur's kits.
Shadowpelt: a black she-cat with silver paws, mother of twilightstar's kits
Elders:
Silverpelt: a silver tom with blue eyes
Mousespeckle: a brown she-cat with amber eyes

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