Hey Im Poet of the shadows , otherwise known as brent ( http://www.allpoetry.com/poet-of-the-shadows )
I havent really tried story writeing before , but i love to write poetry. What I post here will be rough drafts ( and eventally the final copy ) of chapters in the first novella i've ever tried writeing
I would like construstive critisism so I can better my self as a story writer but by consttuctive I meen dont tell me you hate this or like this , tell me why , and how to make it better instead.
Thank you :-) and please enjoy
I havent really tried story writeing before , but i love to write poetry. What I post here will be rough drafts ( and eventally the final copy ) of chapters in the first novella i've ever tried writeing
I would like construstive critisism so I can better my self as a story writer but by consttuctive I meen dont tell me you hate this or like this , tell me why , and how to make it better instead.
Thank you :-) and please enjoy
- Member since February 22, 2007.
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LostShadow on June 19, 2007hey! well I've left a guestbook entry for most of my other friends so i'll leave you one also...yeah i'm strange

Anyway yes i'll be off... Keep the story coming your a great writer!

Em
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DrownInImperfection on April 1, 2007woohoo brent, i found you on storywrite as well. you'll never be rid of me!

