Hey! My name is AJ. I am 20 years old and I am currently writing a new story. I'm deleting some of my old stuff since I am just stuck with writers block. I decided to work on something new and I think its coming out nicely. I will post it as soon as I find my flash Drive. Its a short story (broken in chapters) named, "Midnight Cabin". I would really like feedback on each chapter if you are willing to read it. I already know that there grammer and punctuation mistakes and some spellings. I haven't exactly gotten to fully editing it. I really hope you can over look that though and still enjoy the story.
The summary of "Midnight Cabin":
AJ and Jolene have decided to take a little vacation to a cabin in the northern part of Wisconsin. They are having a good time hanging out at the local carnival, enjoying good music, hitting the hot tub and talking with the local guys. The typical girls vacationing and relaxing. Everything gets flipped upside down when people start showing up dead in the most gruesome way. Now they are in a race to stay alive and still try to stop the murderer from killing anyone else. The cabin is a fearfull and dark place, where its easy to get lost. The carnival, a place of colorful imaginations that could go deadly wrong. And a lake that could be the last place you'll enjoy a cool dip, until the water runs red.
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~~~***~HIM~***~~~
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The soundtrack I came up with to Midnight Cabin:
1. Animal I Have Become - Three Days Grace
2. Duck and Run - Three Doors Down
3. Citizen Soldier - Three Doors Down
4. Crush Crush Crush - Paramore
5. Whispers in the Dark - Skillet
6. Comalies - Lacuna Coil
And more to come
The summary of "Midnight Cabin":
AJ and Jolene have decided to take a little vacation to a cabin in the northern part of Wisconsin. They are having a good time hanging out at the local carnival, enjoying good music, hitting the hot tub and talking with the local guys. The typical girls vacationing and relaxing. Everything gets flipped upside down when people start showing up dead in the most gruesome way. Now they are in a race to stay alive and still try to stop the murderer from killing anyone else. The cabin is a fearfull and dark place, where its easy to get lost. The carnival, a place of colorful imaginations that could go deadly wrong. And a lake that could be the last place you'll enjoy a cool dip, until the water runs red.
(`'•.¸(`'•.¸ ¤ ¸.•'´)¸.•'´)
~~~***~HIM~***~~~
(,.•'`(¸.•'´ ¤ `'•.¸)`'•.¸)
The soundtrack I came up with to Midnight Cabin:
1. Animal I Have Become - Three Days Grace
2. Duck and Run - Three Doors Down
3. Citizen Soldier - Three Doors Down
4. Crush Crush Crush - Paramore
5. Whispers in the Dark - Skillet
6. Comalies - Lacuna Coil
And more to come
- Member since March 25, 2006.
- My mood is , and quote is "tired and feeling..well...not sure".
- I am a 20 year old woman from Wisconsin (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm I'm working, hanging out, or taking care of my car..
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/phoenixfoxfyre
- I have 20 comments, 144 poems, 16 stories
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My thoughts, though are my own You know when I’m hurt<100 words, April 4, 2008. In Personal
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