Ah so you have stumbled across my profile and you care to learn a little bit about me i see. Well my best advice to you, my curious friend, is to read my work. My stories are the key to my personality. Everything i write, i write from my heart and soul. Every word contains a part of me. I am a firm believer of the best way to write convincing stories is to truly live and breathe the story. Every character is a part of me and i am part of every character.
I will admit i am interested in the darker side of human nature and the psychology behind peoples actions or rather inactions. I am also fascinated with the tiniest details of the world. Nothing is more fascinating and more wondrous that the simplicity, yet complexity of reality. No dream or fantasy can compare to that. Often beauty can be found in the most mundane things and i hope this comes across in my writing.
So please... enjoy my curious friend....
What type of critique am i???
Well I am a firm believer in constructive criticism. I am very honest and very frank. I will tell it as it is but i always believe in giving criticism in a positive way. One thing i will be honest about..... I am not the best speller nor is my grammar perfect. Therefore i DON'T comment on that as i feel i'm not qualified.
I do, however, HATE A CLICHE! Sometimes they can not be helped but if i spot a story riddled with them i will comment on it. In my humble opinion using many cliche's is just lazy writing. I don't want to hear someone else's voice. I WANT TO HEAR YOUR VOICE!
My Labor of Love - Suburban Confessional.
This is the very reason i joined storywrite. This is a semi autobiographical story i have been working on for over three years. I consider the character Evie to be me to an extra. The part of me that could have come out if i had let my life spiral out of control. I am currently submitting this story bit by bit over time until I reach the point where i am now... and thats my block! In the last year I have turned my life around and now its really hard to write about a part of me that isn't there anymore. But to close this book now would be a tragedy to me. I am just hoping with your help and review i can get past this block and finally put the Confessional to bed.
I will admit i am interested in the darker side of human nature and the psychology behind peoples actions or rather inactions. I am also fascinated with the tiniest details of the world. Nothing is more fascinating and more wondrous that the simplicity, yet complexity of reality. No dream or fantasy can compare to that. Often beauty can be found in the most mundane things and i hope this comes across in my writing.
So please... enjoy my curious friend....
What type of critique am i???
Well I am a firm believer in constructive criticism. I am very honest and very frank. I will tell it as it is but i always believe in giving criticism in a positive way. One thing i will be honest about..... I am not the best speller nor is my grammar perfect. Therefore i DON'T comment on that as i feel i'm not qualified.
I do, however, HATE A CLICHE! Sometimes they can not be helped but if i spot a story riddled with them i will comment on it. In my humble opinion using many cliche's is just lazy writing. I don't want to hear someone else's voice. I WANT TO HEAR YOUR VOICE!
My Labor of Love - Suburban Confessional.
This is the very reason i joined storywrite. This is a semi autobiographical story i have been working on for over three years. I consider the character Evie to be me to an extra. The part of me that could have come out if i had let my life spiral out of control. I am currently submitting this story bit by bit over time until I reach the point where i am now... and thats my block! In the last year I have turned my life around and now its really hard to write about a part of me that isn't there anymore. But to close this book now would be a tragedy to me. I am just hoping with your help and review i can get past this block and finally put the Confessional to bed.
- Last seen 1 day ago. Member since September 9.
- My mood is , and quote is "quietly reflective".
- I am a 23 year old woman (Australia)
- When I'm not writing, I'm crunching numbers....sigh.



- I am in the groups I canNOT finish my book HELP, New members group, S a R, Seeing Is Believing, The Coven, The Double Martini Lounge: 21 and Over
- I have 50 comments, 14 stories
My Stories
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The continuation of the Suburban Confessional. This chapter is a little long but I did not want to break it up.
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If you are currently reading Suburban Confessional i recommend you don't read this. Spoiler ALERT!100 words, November 12
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In the archway of a derelict building of a busy thoroughfare sits a man. His clothes are mismatched and are as decrepit as the edifice that800 words, 8 comments, November 11
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A cautionary tale about the perils of a little green fairy.
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SageSyren on November 7Thanks so much for stopping by my page. If there is something you'd like me to read, just let me know.
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Cocoly Docolies on November 4hey ruby, i saw your profile xD
