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Ohayo, people of the honorable community of Story Write

Have you read any story of mine yet? (Ooooooops, if you for some retarded reason find two samples of the same story, choose the one looking most correct and ignore the other one, ok?) I tend for some awkward reason to change my name randomly, because, like my online friends so neatly point out, I simply can't stick with one name for too long.

Not to be bragging, but I happen to be quite proud of my English when it comes to writing. As you might guess, I'm not from any English-speaking country; I'm from Norway, though we speak a big mouthful of different languages here. Actually, if you did not know already, we have all the world's, or nearly all, nationalities here. Isn't that great!

If you have read some of my stories, please give me feedback on how you liked it, what you think could be better and advice of all sorts and I will try to improve it as best I can. Of course, this is a free-will thingy and you choose, but it'd be great if!

Now let me ask you: Do you wonder why I choose these themes or how I come up with different characters? Just wondering, but if you'd like to know, I'd gladly tell you. But you'll have to tell me while commenting one of my stories... -_-

I like, when I write and when not, dark themes, of angels and demons, romance, fantasy, sci-fi and religion and pretty much everything that gives a 16 year old boy thoughts, wether good or bad... but not evil or pervy, I like keeping a good rumour of myself, thank you!

I enjoy reading and I've just been living in the Caribbean some months, like half a year ago and my English vocabulary has grown a lot. But, like everyone else, I'm not perfect, so you'll have to help by correcting any of my grammatical sins T.T

I'm actually quite new her on Story Write, but don't underestimate my powers, because "strong is the Force in... ME!" MUAHAHAHAAAA!!! Oh well, I don't know how many of you watch Star Wars, but I'm quite the fan, and Yoda is uberpower, no laughter, please!

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah, guess I'm only supposed to give info about my own self, so this will do. If you mystically need to ask, try finding a way to contact me, or something. In the meantime, I'll try to come up with readable stories for my future fans, and good luck, may the Force be with you!

My name is Sarah
I am but three
My eyes are swollen
I cannot see
I must be stupid
I must be bad
What else could have made
My daddy so mad
I wish I were better
I wish I weren't ugly
Then maybe my mommy
Would still want to hug me
I can't speak at all
I can't do a wrong
Or else I'm locked up
All the day long
When I awake
I'm all alone
The house is dark
My folks aren't home
When my mommy does come
I'll try and be nice
So maybe I'll get
Just one whipping tonight
Don't make a sound
I just heard a car
My daddy is back
From Charlie's Bar
I hear him curse
My name he calls
I press myself
Against the wall
I try and hide
From his evil eyes
I'm so afraid now
I'm starting to cry
He finds me weeping
He shouts ugly words
He says its my fault
That he suffers at work
He slaps me and hits me
And yells at me more
I finally get free
And I run for the door
He's already locked it
And I start to bawl
He takes me and throws me
Against the hard wall
I fall to the floor
With my bones nearly broken
And my daddy continues
With more bad words spoken
"I'm sorry!" I scream
But its now much too late
His face has been twisted
Into unimaginable hate
The hurt and the pain
Again and again
Oh please God, have mercy
Oh please let it end
And he finally stops
And heads for the door
While I lay there motionless
Sprawled on the floor
My name is Sarah
And I am but three
Tonight my daddy
Murdered me

I just love this poem. It's sad, but yet, there are several moments of thruth in it.

Hi, me again! Sorry, but I forgot to mention what I'm writing myself... Wait, no I didn't... Stress!!! Very well, then. Just a reminder: I write anything, really. Well, mostly fantasy-like stuff and some dark and mystery, though I'm not really good at it. Maybe some be a bit of religious, or at least got some religious aspects and such. Ever since I read "Angels and Demons" by Dan Brown - best book ever written, in my eyes, by the way - I've wanted to write a sci-fi story. I'm currently working on it, named "Creating Life". It's a series of chapters which I hope to publish as a novel one day, and therefore I need all the help I can get. Since English is my second language, I don't really go that well with it, but I'm trying, so I hope it's good enough for my readers.

Ok, there's something you guys need to know about me, if nothing else. You've might figured already, but I'm not the straight-forward, clear person in speech. One has to think a bit before getting my points sometimes. I'm sorry, but that's my problem and if you guys get what I'm saying right now, thank you.

Oh yeah, one more thing: One group in which I've been a member has got the name "The Weird Group". Let me just tell you that I've got three kinds of humor; one for kids, one for grown-ups and one for mutants (A.K.A teenagers). I hope this is kind of normal...

If you guys have a request for a story, theme or anything, I'll do it (if I find it interesting and got time. I don't write just anything, but mostly)!

"The Story of a Girl" (Not the song, though it's good!)

For those of you people who've read or started on my only continuing story (so far), the Sci-fi story "Creating Life": If you wonder about the main character, Alva Andrea Elaine, keep reading. If not, stop.

This was after having read the - to me - spectacular novel Angels and Demons and I was at once inspired by Brown's work. By knowing a couple of people and watching too many movies, I, one night in bed, came up with my best and most special character so far. I created her by mixing different personalities, both fictional and non-fictional and adding a couple of features upon, she was ready. I wrote down different brain-stormed "rules" for her behaviour, personality and such, so I won't lose track of them (yet). I'm sure there's more to the story, and when I remind myself, I'll let you know.

I'm a Christian, a "Jesus Freak", as others so gracefully call it, though that's not my opinion. Yes, I do love Mormonisn, which is the degree of Christianity that I'm holding, but no, I don't go around bragging. (Not saying anyone does, chill!) As most other Christians true to their faith, I go to church each Sunday and read my scriptures. I also do some youth activities, sometimes with the Young Women (which are all, like, super-cool and -pretty, at least most of them, the other ones I don't know very well) and attend biscdiscs (kind of discussion meetings) every other Sunday.

There's really a lot more to tell, but I've got no inspiration right now and... Oh yeah: If anybody should be offended by ANY of my works, LET ME KNOW!!!

There! I'll edit later...

Yellu, peeps, I'm back! Today, I'll tell you something about my past experiences within writing. I've written (or started on) several stories, all different topics and ideas (almost).

The Legend of Zelda - Some years back, I started writing a story about The Legend of Zelda, including new characters and all. Unfortunately, that didn't work out much and I quit.

One Piece - Later, after watching a show called One Piece, I started a story of pirates, my own creations, of course, but some months later, I quit this one as well. It's still in my bookshelf, but I never read or return to it and continue the story.

Naruto - The third, a Naruto tale, had begun later and I was at times obsessed by writing it. Then, suddenly, there was no inspiration left and I don't even know where I left off.

Phenomena - I'm currently into - or was at that time - a series called Phenomena, a fantasy story. It triggered me and I started writing my own fantasy novel. But it, too, was temporarily delayed. I might start writing it over again, since I somehow managed to lose the memory stick recording its data.

Another Naruto - I wrote another Naruto story and posted three chapters on here, but it was not much to continue.

Angels and Demons - After reading Dan Brown's Angels and Demons, I wanted to write something that I could put some of my own understanding in and I started on a stary I called Angels and Demons. I don't know if I've still got it, though. It's originally in Norwegian, so it would basically do no good to post it here, I'm sorry.

Creating Life - And now, finally, I've made up my mind (I hope). I am going to finish this story, Creating Life, wether in English or not. I don't know what the future will bid on, but I won't stop writing, though it can sometimes get tough.

An angel rare, an angel fair
Has tumbled down to Earth
So full of love, life from above
She demonstrates her worth

Of timeless things and sacred dreams
She reaches out to heal
Against the Odds, embraced by Gods
With honesty that's real

I couldn't see, she came to me
To open up my eyes
Confusion swirled, all through my world
She lead me past the lies

No blood was shed, now spirit lead
I travel on with her
No holding back, safe from attack
Or whatever may occur

No future planned, with her I'll stand
My Guardian Angel she
Tomorrows come and I won't run
She's my security

This is not my own poem. Better yet, I don't write poems, not this well, anyway. This is Andy Stephenson's, and I naturally give him the credit for it. I just wanted to have it here because I think it's so beautiful in many ways. I think it reminds us how our loved ones help us through the day, strenghtens and nourishes us - sometimes without our notice, or thanks. This, I'll say, especially counts when speaking of the women in our lives - sisters, daughters, moms, wives, and (girl)friends. I personally can relate to several occasions with at least one of these, since I'm not old enough to be a husbond or dad. But I'm not going to share - it might be a bit private, to not only myself, and so I'll just leave my thoughts with them, my holy women out there: What would Man do without such wonderful and faithful creatures. In the name of mine - and our all's - Holy Saviour, Jesus Christ. Amen.

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PS: Some of you might have noticed that I've now created a real homepage. It was created on 20th or 21st of August, so I'm sorry if it's not very informative yet. Also, I figured that since I'm originally Norwegian, I'll write in Norwegian as well. However, I'm not sure if that will be a problem for some of you; your computers might be able to translate it into English. Anyway, if it works, try it out!

I've got this passion of military and weapons ever since trying out Halo: Combat Evolved, but the longing has only gotten stronger recently. It will be a couple of years now, and I've recently started going into Halo history, writing my own Halo novel (which I will most likely translate to English and post here, for those of you interested and I've strted military role playing with Aura Light at Anything Group, and I hope we will become more. So please don't hesitate; jump right in! We'd certainly love more recruits and are mostly in constant danger