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~This could be a the beginning of a whole new age!~

Hello there. I been writing since I was young, mostly for a lack of anything better to do.

Imagination has been my hideout, and I thought that it would be great to possibly have one of my stories published one day.

The only problem is that I am not very good at editing my stories.

I would love to hear feedback on my stories, in fact anyone who comments on my stories I will try to critique on one of your stories.

Thanks for reading my page, this will be edited as I go as I think of other things to share and I improve in my writing.

Have a nice day!

My Stories

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  • Patrick (2)
    When your a cop it isn't a very good idea to be distracted by anything.All that day I kept thinking about Cindy even when I was on the job.
    400 words, 2 comments, May 18
  • Patrick (1)
    I used a handkerchief to keep the wound from bleeding out. It seemed Steve was doing nothing to help out. Some man, being lax when someone
    400 words, 4 comments, May 11. In , Fiction
  • Dragon
    Flickering eyes in the dark. Slitted eyes watching you from the darkness. I see then.1 / Teeth, long and sharp. Jagged like broken glass. T
    100 words, 1 comment, May 5. In , Fantasy, Fiction, Poem
  • Silverleaf forest (revised)
    Leaves of silver, leaves of gold...remember the stories that you've been told.1 / For winter it was rather warm, but it really wasn't any d
    2900 words, 4 comments, April 18. In Fantasy, Fiction

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  • Rebel 1 : Reviews on May 14
    I really want my work reviewed and will return reviews, once I find where they are.
  • kitty ROSE on May 10
    So, remember the part that you wrote onto mine? Post it onto a new story and post it on the group page, please! =D
  • kitty ROSE : Hey! on May 8
    Join our group!

    http://storywrite.com/group/show/Five%20Person%20Story

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