I've noticed that my critiquing style is pretty blunt.
If you're looking for constructive or critical feedback just ask me.
Please don't send me a message to the effective of "I don't care about what you have to say! I WRITE 4 MYSELF!!!" If you're posting a story here, I assume you want constructive feedback- don't waste your time and mine by posting if you don't expect criticism.
If you're looking for constructive or critical feedback just ask me.
Please don't send me a message to the effective of "I don't care about what you have to say! I WRITE 4 MYSELF!!!" If you're posting a story here, I assume you want constructive feedback- don't waste your time and mine by posting if you don't expect criticism.
- Member since January 18, 2007.
- I am in the groups NaNoWriMo, Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers, Writing Whatever, Writing Whatever You Want
- I have 18 comments, 32 poems, 17 stories
Stories I'm focused on
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A Victorian-style romance about a young woman who works in a cake shop, the man whom she loves and a horrifying disaster.
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My Stories
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Hyou Shitsu: Ethics / Proper Values of and for One’s Life, How One Should Govern One’s Self / Chapter 1: Country with a Castle / The day was slowly dying into the night as the sun grew steadily lower agai
My Poetry
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Its translucent color so alluring, taste and aroma so gentle and mellow; offer admiring<100 words, November 22, 2007
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that hair's strands come raining down in tattered fringes. or that the hole in the creased, greasy blue shirt...<100 words, November 22, 2007
My other items
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- Something is Rotten in the State of Denmark at allpoetry
from my window I can see - Muscat Gummy at allpoetry
Its translucent color so alluring, taste and aroma so gentle and mellow; offer admiring - certainly it is imperfect... at allpoetry
that hair's strands come raining down in tattered fringes. or that the hole in the creased, greasy blue shirt...
