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Have ya seen my movies? 
https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=vb.1828226294&type=2
http://www.horrorschool.com/users/immortalbeloved where you can find Thaxter Jones: The Masterpiece Edition
Go here to buy my first book! http://www.publishamerica.net/product47480.html
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Immortal%20Beloved/481672/
A man chooses, a slave obeys.- Andrew Ryan
Jesus said... the Kingdom of God is inside you, and all around you, not in mansions of wood and stone. Split a piece of wood... and I am there, lift a stone... and you will find me. - Stigmata
If you find my writing style unconventional or offensive in some way, shape, or form then don't read it however if you find that you do like it and CAN tolerate it then you are more than welcome to comment and give me feedback on what you thought of my work. I am the type of person that doesn't cling to the OCD of writing poetry I go outside the box unlike some people who wish to remain inside the box.
If you judge someone or hell ANYBODY by their poetic form, you might be a shallow son of a bitch.
If you bash someone's work because you're jealous that you aren't as good, you might be retarded as fuck.
If you wish to learn how to better yourself in the ways of writing works of art, that would be the smartest line of thought you ever had.
So how do I describe myself to you and prove that I am just as good as the other poets on here?
It's not about how many trophies you have on your page, it's about the heart that goes into each and every piece whether you hate it or not. But to know me is like figuring out a Rubix cube: complex but fun in your spare time. For you see my writing style ranges from the conventional romance pieces to the more unorthodox styling known as The Prophetic Samaritan Chronicles Collection.
It's a story within a legend.
A legend within a fable.
A fable within a tale.
A legacy within a lesson.
I take random shit and throw it all together in one poem but the catch is that each sentence is a story unto itself.
And occasionally I'll throw in the N word or Fag or whatever term I like because it either fits or I'm actually using the proper definition to that word.
Nigger means ignorant and if you are reading this and going "No it's a black person" then get the fuck off my page you ignorant dumbass however if you understand that I'm smart and very intelligent then you'll continue reading on.
Then there's my bastard child, Thaxter Jones.
He is what the true vampire is supposed to be: a cold blooded murderer not a sparkling fruit who gives hickeys and acts like he's gonna blow his load when he smells virgin.
I poured all my darkest desires and fantasies into him and the end result? Gold trophy, silver trophy, and green trophy for some of the pieces about him. I mean shit it is the most highly detailed story I've written to date. It's graphic and extremely violent with tons of gore, pedophilia in utter shocking detail, rape left and right, but basically everything you could want in a horror movie with my dark sense of humor stirred in the pot. So it's in the Adult and Mature category for that reason.
There's the softer side of my works.
The Amy Jacobs Saga is quite simply about my dream girl. Now when you read this you probably think "Oh she's real isn't she?" and the answer is no and at some times I wish she was but that was then. Back then I had no one to love and no one wanted to love me all they saw was the "friend" complex not the "relationship" complex. So I created her to help me survive through high school and through life later on. Which brings me to the second part of my softer side: The Jessica Brown Saga.
Jessica Brown my first real crush from 2002 and I never told her. But alas a star wars trilogy, 20 something poems later she still doesn't know or she does and won't acknowledge it but whatever I've moved on from her. But when you're heavyset like me and all the hot girls you wish you could tell them that real honest guys like us exist, they simply laugh and cling to their paper six pack guys whom don't last long anyway.
So yeah this is me skin shed, heart opened wide for you questions? just PM
I
We are the hollow men
We are the stuffed men
Leaning together
Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!
Our dried voices, when
We whisper together
Are quiet and meaningless
As wind in dry grass
Or rats' feet over broken glass
In our dry cellar
Shape without form, shade without colour,
Paralysed force, gesture without motion;
Those who have crossed
With direct eyes, to death's other Kingdom
Remember us -- if at all -- not as lost
Violent souls, but only
As the hollow men
The stuffed men.
II
Eyes I dare not meet in dreams
In death's dream kingdom
These do not appear:
There, the eyes are
Sunlight on a broken column
There, is a tree swinging
And voices are
In the wind's singing
More distant and more solemn
Than a fading star.
Let me be no nearer
In death's dream kingdom
Let me also wear
Such deliberate disguises
Rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves
In a field
Behaving as the wind behaves
No nearer --
Not that final meeting
In the twilight kingdom
III
This is the dead land
This is cactus land
Here the stone images
Are raised, here they receive
The supplication of a dead man's hand
Under the twinkle of a fading star.
Is it like this
In death's other kingdom
Waking alone
At the hour when we are
Trembling with tenderness
Lips that would kiss
Form prayers to broken stone.
IV
The eyes are not here
There are no eyes here
In this valley of dying stars
In this hollow valley
This broken jaw of our lost kingdoms
In this last of meeting places
We grope together
And avoid speech
Gathered on this beach of the tumid river
Sightless, unless
The eyes reappear
As the perpetual star
Multifoliate rose
Of death's twilight kingdom
The hope only
Of empty men.
V
Here we go round the prickly pear
Prickly pear prickly pear
Here we go round the prickly pear
At five o'clock in the morning.
Between the idea
And the reality
Between the motion
And the act
Falls the Shadow
For Thine is the Kingdom
Between the conception
And the creation
Between the emotion
And the response
Falls the Shadow
Life is very long
Between the desire
And the spasm
Between the potency
And the existence
Between the essence
And the descent
Falls the Shadow
For Thine is the Kingdom
For Thine is
Life is
For Thine is the
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang but a whimper.
- T.S. Eliot, The Hollow Men 1925
Drugs ain't a black thing, or a white thing. It's a death thing. Death don't give a shit about color. - New Jack City
My writing style is very controversial just so you know so if you stumble across my works and complain about me using either the N-word, Fag, or saying shit about Christ then please do grow up and realize that it's only WORDS none of it is true it's my writing style don't like it don't read it plain and simple
everybody’s a nigger no matter your color, ethnicity, or religion- me circa 2006
Speaking on my writing style and all that jazz I must explain some things to you.
The Amy Jacobs Saga- she is a fictious character that I created back in 2002 ironically enough she was born from Saliva's "Your Diesase" but as you can tell a creation turned into an obsession but you gotta understand back then I had no woman so she was my only security blanket
but I can tell you I am better now not hooked on Amy as I once was
The Jessica Brown Saga- Hmmm she was my first crush back in high school now don't go and say "awwww" cuz she's a cunt it's true I mean I spent like 8 yrs crushing on her and when I finally told her albeit her bf at the time brought it up and yea didn't go down so well but they ain't together anymore so I don't give a fuck but you must be asking yourself "With all these girls Immortal you must still have a place for them don't you?" and my answer would be "Not really because looking back in retrospect yeah I should still carry a torch for them but if I did it'd be a small candle"
I mean with Amy it was about comfort.
With Jess it was about adoration and thanks to her I wrote some of the best damn pieces ever even got trophies same goes for Amy also.
The RP War Diaries- Well that's simple but since you're coming across my page as a newbie who's never heard of me well I'll briefly explain don't wanna get banned AGAIN V_v hmmm well The Diaries are incomplete but long story short I did a lot of bad shit for a good reason aka controversial but if you want the whole story head on over to writerscafe.org and look up my name on there and click on the book titled: Year Of Hell With A Bleak Chance Of Hope and yeah that pretty much sums up my life four years back.
But with the War Diaries I have posted on here you can see how I went from on top of the world, to complete depressed insanity, to my uprising in 2008, my concepts for kingdoms & characters which I made all by myself.
But it's like I said what I write that contains offensive material IT'S JUST WORDS NOTHING MORE NOTHING LESS don't forget that and if you have questions don't hesitate to IM me I'll answer ^_^
The Thaxter Jones Era- my most disturbing creation if i do say so myself basically it contains all the things which offend you the reader the most or gives you wood or makes your snatch wet but whatever it's in the adult and mature category for a reason because it's graphic, violent, disturbing, and generally not meant for little kids
Well shit some of you know me and some of you don't can't say I blame ya.
Cuz I don't know who the fuck I am lol but I'll try to explain it best I can.
New Version of me I have a wonderful fiance' and my life is back on track for the first time since I can remember now for those of you who think I'm gonna revert back to my old ways well I might but nothing like then. Then I was reckless and careless didn't give a fuck about anything or anyone only to get the job done which I did.
Now that I'm back on here I'm gonna do things differently.
Small bits of info:
XBL Gamertag- UNSCCOGARMADA
YIM- grevious_starkiller_ventress@ymail.com
Facebook- Oreo Brewer
Cell- 1 800 kiss my ass (just kiddin you gotta earn my respect and trust first)
Now over to do some RPing
Oh and as for XBL if you add me and you join me in multiplayer for Gears, Red Dead Redemption, or Halo remember this it's about teamwork not being gung ho V_v
https://www.facebook.com/media/set/?set=vb.1828226294&type=2http://www.horrorschool.com/users/immortalbeloved where you can find Thaxter Jones: The Masterpiece Edition
Go here to buy my first book! http://www.publishamerica.net/product47480.html
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Immortal%20Beloved/481672/
A man chooses, a slave obeys.- Andrew Ryan
Jesus said... the Kingdom of God is inside you, and all around you, not in mansions of wood and stone. Split a piece of wood... and I am there, lift a stone... and you will find me. - Stigmata
If you find my writing style unconventional or offensive in some way, shape, or form then don't read it
however if you find that you do like it and CAN tolerate it then you are more than welcome to comment and give me feedback on what you thought of my work. I am the type of person that doesn't cling to the OCD of writing poetry I go outside the box unlike some people who wish to remain inside the box.If you judge someone or hell ANYBODY by their poetic form, you might be a shallow son of a bitch.
If you bash someone's work because you're jealous that you aren't as good, you might be retarded as fuck.
If you wish to learn how to better yourself in the ways of writing works of art, that would be the smartest line of thought you ever had.
So how do I describe myself to you and prove that I am just as good as the other poets on here?
It's not about how many trophies you have on your page, it's about the heart that goes into each and every piece whether you hate it or not. But to know me is like figuring out a Rubix cube: complex but fun in your spare time. For you see my writing style ranges from the conventional romance pieces to the more unorthodox styling known as The Prophetic Samaritan Chronicles Collection.
It's a story within a legend.
A legend within a fable.
A fable within a tale.
A legacy within a lesson.
I take random shit and throw it all together in one poem but the catch is that each sentence is a story unto itself.
And occasionally I'll throw in the N word or Fag or whatever term I like because it either fits or I'm actually using the proper definition to that word.
Nigger means ignorant and if you are reading this and going "No it's a black person" then get the fuck off my page you ignorant dumbass however if you understand that I'm smart and very intelligent then you'll continue reading on.
Then there's my bastard child, Thaxter Jones.
He is what the true vampire is supposed to be: a cold blooded murderer not a sparkling fruit who gives hickeys and acts like he's gonna blow his load when he smells virgin.
I poured all my darkest desires and fantasies into him and the end result? Gold trophy, silver trophy, and green trophy for some of the pieces about him. I mean shit it is the most highly detailed story I've written to date. It's graphic and extremely violent with tons of gore, pedophilia in utter shocking detail, rape left and right, but basically everything you could want in a horror movie with my dark sense of humor stirred in the pot. So it's in the Adult and Mature category for that reason.
There's the softer side of my works.
The Amy Jacobs Saga is quite simply about my dream girl. Now when you read this you probably think "Oh she's real isn't she?" and the answer is no and at some times I wish she was but that was then. Back then I had no one to love and no one wanted to love me all they saw was the "friend" complex not the "relationship" complex. So I created her to help me survive through high school and through life later on. Which brings me to the second part of my softer side: The Jessica Brown Saga.
Jessica Brown my first real crush from 2002 and I never told her. But alas a star wars trilogy, 20 something poems later she still doesn't know or she does and won't acknowledge it but whatever I've moved on from her. But when you're heavyset like me and all the hot girls you wish you could tell them that real honest guys like us exist, they simply laugh and cling to their paper six pack guys whom don't last long anyway.
So yeah this is me skin shed, heart opened wide for you questions? just PM
I
We are the hollow men
We are the stuffed men
Leaning together
Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!
Our dried voices, when
We whisper together
Are quiet and meaningless
As wind in dry grass
Or rats' feet over broken glass
In our dry cellar
Shape without form, shade without colour,
Paralysed force, gesture without motion;
Those who have crossed
With direct eyes, to death's other Kingdom
Remember us -- if at all -- not as lost
Violent souls, but only
As the hollow men
The stuffed men.
II
Eyes I dare not meet in dreams
In death's dream kingdom
These do not appear:
There, the eyes are
Sunlight on a broken column
There, is a tree swinging
And voices are
In the wind's singing
More distant and more solemn
Than a fading star.
Let me be no nearer
In death's dream kingdom
Let me also wear
Such deliberate disguises
Rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves
In a field
Behaving as the wind behaves
No nearer --
Not that final meeting
In the twilight kingdom
III
This is the dead land
This is cactus land
Here the stone images
Are raised, here they receive
The supplication of a dead man's hand
Under the twinkle of a fading star.
Is it like this
In death's other kingdom
Waking alone
At the hour when we are
Trembling with tenderness
Lips that would kiss
Form prayers to broken stone.
IV
The eyes are not here
There are no eyes here
In this valley of dying stars
In this hollow valley
This broken jaw of our lost kingdoms
In this last of meeting places
We grope together
And avoid speech
Gathered on this beach of the tumid river
Sightless, unless
The eyes reappear
As the perpetual star
Multifoliate rose
Of death's twilight kingdom
The hope only
Of empty men.
V
Here we go round the prickly pear
Prickly pear prickly pear
Here we go round the prickly pear
At five o'clock in the morning.
Between the idea
And the reality
Between the motion
And the act
Falls the Shadow
For Thine is the Kingdom
Between the conception
And the creation
Between the emotion
And the response
Falls the Shadow
Life is very long
Between the desire
And the spasm
Between the potency
And the existence
Between the essence
And the descent
Falls the Shadow
For Thine is the Kingdom
For Thine is
Life is
For Thine is the
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang but a whimper.
- T.S. Eliot, The Hollow Men 1925
Drugs ain't a black thing, or a white thing. It's a death thing. Death don't give a shit about color. - New Jack City
My writing style is very controversial just so you know so if you stumble across my works and complain about me using either the N-word, Fag, or saying shit about Christ then please do grow up and realize that it's only WORDS none of it is true it's my writing style don't like it don't read it plain and simple
everybody’s a nigger no matter your color, ethnicity, or religion- me circa 2006
Speaking on my writing style and all that jazz I must explain some things to you.
The Amy Jacobs Saga- she is a fictious character that I created back in 2002 ironically enough she was born from Saliva's "Your Diesase" but as you can tell a creation turned into an obsession but you gotta understand back then I had no woman so she was my only security blanket
but I can tell you I am better now not hooked on Amy as I once wasThe Jessica Brown Saga- Hmmm she was my first crush back in high school now don't go and say "awwww" cuz she's a cunt it's true I mean I spent like 8 yrs crushing on her and when I finally told her albeit her bf at the time brought it up and yea didn't go down so well but they ain't together anymore so I don't give a fuck but you must be asking yourself "With all these girls Immortal you must still have a place for them don't you?" and my answer would be "Not really because looking back in retrospect yeah I should still carry a torch for them but if I did it'd be a small candle"
I mean with Amy it was about comfort.
With Jess it was about adoration and thanks to her I wrote some of the best damn pieces ever even got trophies same goes for Amy also.
The RP War Diaries- Well that's simple but since you're coming across my page as a newbie who's never heard of me well I'll briefly explain don't wanna get banned AGAIN V_v hmmm well The Diaries are incomplete but long story short I did a lot of bad shit for a good reason aka controversial but if you want the whole story head on over to writerscafe.org and look up my name on there and click on the book titled: Year Of Hell With A Bleak Chance Of Hope and yeah that pretty much sums up my life four years back.
But with the War Diaries I have posted on here you can see how I went from on top of the world, to complete depressed insanity, to my uprising in 2008, my concepts for kingdoms & characters which I made all by myself
.But it's like I said what I write that contains offensive material IT'S JUST WORDS NOTHING MORE NOTHING LESS don't forget that and if you have questions don't hesitate to IM me I'll answer ^_^
The Thaxter Jones Era- my most disturbing creation if i do say so myself basically it contains all the things which offend you the reader the most or gives you wood or makes your snatch wet but whatever it's in the adult and mature category for a reason because it's graphic, violent, disturbing, and generally not meant for little kids
Well shit some of you know me and some of you don't can't say I blame ya.
Cuz I don't know who the fuck I am lol but I'll try to explain it best I can.
New Version of me I have a wonderful fiance' and my life is back on track for the first time since I can remember now for those of you who think I'm gonna revert back to my old ways well I might but nothing like then. Then I was reckless and careless didn't give a fuck about anything or anyone only to get the job done which I did.
Now that I'm back on here I'm gonna do things differently.
Small bits of info:
XBL Gamertag- UNSCCOGARMADA
YIM- grevious_starkiller_ventress@ymail.com
Facebook- Oreo Brewer
Cell- 1 800 kiss my ass (just kiddin you gotta earn my respect and trust first)
Now over to do some RPing
Oh and as for XBL if you add me and you join me in multiplayer for Gears, Red Dead Redemption, or Halo remember this it's about teamwork not being gung ho V_v
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