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Heyy!

well i guess you can already tell that i like to write...or i wouldn't have signed up so nothing new there! I'm also a serious athlete so i don't have as much time as I'd like to write all the stories swimming through my brain!
i took a communicative arts class 2 years ago, and that's is when my love for writing was really recognized. I had a tendency of having the longest "short stories" in class, which my friends thought was extremely funny ;]

but anyways i hope you guys will read my stories and tell me what you think!!

*warning* there are i think two stories i have written with some pretty detailed gore...i think it's awesome but if you can't stomach that very well i would suggest not reading it ;] thanks!!!


i still have 3 or 4 stories i have yet to post, but i think i am going to wait until i get some feed back on my other stories first before i post them

ok thanks!!

~~Lorin~~

  • Last seen 2 days ago. Member since December 19, 2008.
  • My mood is , and quote is "and things just keep gettin' weirder....have mercy ^_^ lol".
  • I am a 16 year old girl from North Carolina (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm playin' sports, reading, or working out :D.
  • I have 232 comments, 10 stories, 1 journal

Stories I'm focused on

  • The Unseeing Ways of A Sailor Boy
    Out of the foggy mist, a dark and dangerous ship loomed over the ocean. Movement was all over the ship, but the fog kept close to the ship
    1500 words, 3 comments, December 19, 2008

My Stories

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  • Tears in the Storm
    The gloomy foreboding sky invaded her thoughts as the slight rumble of thunder reached her ears. The damp air swirled in an arch around her as she pushed the swing back and forth with her feet. Dark iron chains creaked at the
    900 words, 4 comments, October 31
  • The Haven
    She closed her eyes as she tried to get a hold of her rising anger. Stabbing her hands deep into her pockets, Mandie turned away from the group of girls mocking her, and instead headed towards the swings on the other side of
    500 words, 3 comments, July 5. In Heart, Life, Love, Music, Romance, Teen
  • Blurring The Lines
    I walked through the gymnasium doors and silently groaned. My one haven, the place I go for stress relief had been over-taken once again. H
    500 words, 2 comments, July 5
  • The Simple One
    300 words, 13 comments, July 4. In Fiction, Inspirational, Love, Young adult

My journal entries

  • ^_^ May 2nd
    You know you're pathetic when you start thinking of ideas to go see the boy you have a MAJOR crush on at work...well guess what? I'm PATHETIC! lol Boy: "Hey!" Me: "Hey!" Boy:" You just missed a major rush. They were backed up all the way over there!" Me:"Well I'm glad I missed it!" Boy:"Me too." He looks
    May 2, In A moment, Friends, Love, My life, Personal, Random.  300 words. → 7 comments, Add one?

Guest Book

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  • SaffronGreenSpirit on June 24
    Hi! When will you add more to Enchanted's story?
  • KnockOut : BIG SIS!!! on December 22, 2008
    I LOVE YOU TOO!!!!
  • emmalynlorraine on December 20, 2008
    haha no i liked it. very strange though. but cute. :]
  • C.rimsonQ.uill : U and U alone on December 20, 2008
    OMG!!! ur like the most amazing cuzing ever! lol <3 u and keep doing wat ur doing.

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