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Hmmm.....what to say about myself that doesn't give too much away. I love to write obviously and I'm extremely competitive in sports. Reading is my favorite past time and I am a real nit picker when it comes to editing or reading over other people's poem/stories so don't feel like what I say when I comment is personal it's not. (Not all the time at least).
If you comment me I make sure to comment back (always).
Don't be afraid to be critical...I'm not...
...If I missed anything or you want to know more about me the easiest way is to ask...enjoy!

  • Last seen on Nov 18 6:12 PM. Member since May 30.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Winter break can't come fast enough!!".
  • I am a 18 year old woman (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm coming up with crazy ideas, running at midnight, or doing something else weird..
  • I have 79 comments, 131 poems, 24 stories, 5 journals

My Stories

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My Poetry

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  • Reflections of the Past
    <100 words, 1 comment, November 11
  • Still No Courage
    I watched you with eyes full of desire,
    Though you never noticed the fire that burned there,
    <100 words, November 9
  • Midnight and Moonless
    Strecthing the muscles letting the glow of the moon flow into me,
    Darkness raging inside as my eyes adjust to the black unknown.
    <100 words, 3 comments, November 9. In Dark, Fear, Contest

My other items

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  • Column: Falling for a Friend at allpoetry
    What happens when you want the whole of someone so badly that you end up destroying the small parts of them you already possess? You hurt. A lot.
  • Column: Missed Oppurtunities at allpoetry
    "Bravery In the Mind is Fear in the Heart Clogging the Soul with Confusion."

My journal entries

  • Good-Bye
    I never thought I'd write the words "they forgot about me" then again I thought they never would. Distance is something that people say you can breach but I don't believe them. Not any more. Not when my life was split and each piece of me went in different directions in search of their own separate futures. Not until
    October 12, 200 words. → 1 comment, Add one?
  • Ruined Dream Story: A Rant
    So last night I had the most amazing dream with the most perfect story line ever. "Why did I not write about it?" you ask because I can't remember what it was about. I woke up about mid-morning and knew it would make a wonderful story but instead of getting up right then and writing down the basics and the characters
    September 26, 200 words. → Make first comment?
  • ME (used to be my page)
    Before I wow you with my amazing self I'm going to let this page explain a bit about who I am and what I stand for. Or at least I'll try to convey that to you, I'm a very complex person so I don't know if I can actually get my personality on a page. 1 So the other day I was sitting at my computer thinking about
    August 17, 700 words. → Make first comment?

Guest Book

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  • StevenHoward : Thank you on August 12
    Thank you for stopping by, and for leaving the comment on "Maggie of Seveir County." I'm glad you liked it.

    I stopped by to get a taste of your writing as well. I'm glad I did. I hope to be able to return and read more of your work in the future.

    Thank you again. I enjoyed my visit to your site.

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